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Post by lillyscotty on Oct 25, 2009 19:03:00 GMT -5
Title: Mind vs. Heart Summary: Lilly decides to have time off after the crash. She travels to Sea Side Beach with Scotty after he begs her to let him tag along. What will happen when they are alone? Rating: PG-13 Please review, really trying to improve. Note: The location is from my imagination; don’t know any beaches or fancy locations in America so I had to make it up. *********************************************************************** “I can’t believe I let you come.” Lilly grumbled, sitting in the passenger seat as Scotty drove like a manic. “Well boss reckons it will be good for me to get some time off too.” “Do you have to drive so fast?” Lilly asked, holding onto the side of the seats as Scotty sped up, trying to make the orange light. “You’ll get used of it.” It took more than 4 hours to reach Sea Side Beach. Lilly had ordered a small-type cabin in front of the beach. It had a perfect view for the next 2 weeks. When Scotty had also been given time off from Stillman, Scotty begged Lilly to let him accompany her. At first she hesitated but felt pity for Scotty when he told her that he really needed company, still overcoming the aftershocks of her crash. Scotty had now stopped in front of a convenience store to get more supplies and petrol. Lilly waited in the car, feeling the hot weather make her sweat. When Scotty returned he passed her a cold soda, whilst he opened up his own. “I need to go the bathroom.” Lilly mumbled, passing Scotty the soda. Before Scotty could answer Lilly was out of the car. Scotty watched as Lilly walked in front of the car, over to the rest rooms. His eyes travelled down her body, finally reaching her butt. He chuckled to himself, taking in the slim curves of her body. He shook his head shaking away the thoughts. In less than 2 minutes Lilly was back, looking a lot more refreshed. “Ready?” Scotty asked. “Nope, I get to drive.” “You promised me I could.” “Well you drive too fast for my liking...keys please.” Scotty sighed, taking the keys from his lap and handing them to her. They both swapped seats. Once on the road Lilly felt herself getting hot again. The air-conditioner was doing nothing to help the sweat pour from her forehead. “God, if it’s this hot when we get there, we’re coming back.” Lilly whispered, wiping the dripping sweat from her cheeks. “Stop complainin’, it’ll be fun.” “I get the big bed okay?” “What?” Scotty asked, looking at her with spite. “You can get the small one in the lounge. I planned it all, you’re lucky you’re coming at all.” “Fine.” Scotty pouted, reaching back to get a packet of Chicken flavour chips. Two more hours into the drive and Lilly pulled up into a car park off the beach. Lilly sighed, feeling herself cool down as she stepped out of the car. Both Lilly and Scotty retrieved their belongings from the boot and walked to the biggest cabin they could see. Once entering they walked to the front desk. “Reservations for Lilly Rush.” Lilly said, placing her things down on the floor. “Yes...here’s your key, second cabin to right.” “Thanks.” Lilly and Scotty murmured at the same time. Once finding their cabin, they walked inside. They checked out the layout, and unpacked all their belongings. The cabin had no windows, just curtains that blowed in the wind and helped the sun shine in giving the room a romantic feel. When walking in, you entered the lounge which had a bed on the right, beneath the window, and furniture on the left for you to relax and watch TV. There were three rooms that came off the lounge. Lilly’s room – which had a bathroom, the main bathroom, and small dining room. Lilly came out, taking a seat next to Scotty on the couch. “So...Did you bring a bikini?” Scotty asked, lifting on eyebrow at Lilly. Lilly swatted him with her hand. “Is that all your mind thinks about?” “Only when I haven’t been laid in a while.” “God Scotty, you’re so desperate you wanna see me in a bikini.” “I ain’t desperate Lil, but I would mind seeing those long legs of yours.” Scotty winked flirtatiously at Lilly. “I don’t know how to swim.”Lilly confessed. Scotty laughed until he realised she was serious. “Then why did you choose here?” “I thought it would be relaxing.” “Do you want me to teach you?” Scotty asked. “Are you sure?” “Yeah, get on some bathers and meet me outside.” *************************************************************************
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Post by madmax on Oct 26, 2009 4:31:12 GMT -5
Hey Lillyscotty Not sure what are you trying to improve on since your style of writing is always great. The beginning of the story is very good and I'm waiting for more My favourite part from this chapter "His eyes travelled down her body, finally reaching her butt. He chuckled to himself, taking in the slim curves of her body. He shook his head shaking away the thoughts." When I read it I imagined Scotty doing this and I couldn't stop laughing As I said, I'm waiting for more P.S. 'mum' and 'mom' is not the only difference between US and Australian english Americans use 'gas' instead of 'petrol' P.S.2 Exact location doesn't matter just use general term - Jersey Shore or Delaware Shore, but I guess Jersey is more common place for ppl to visit
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Post by lillyscotty on Oct 26, 2009 4:34:40 GMT -5
Oh ok, thanks for the great review, any tips would be great. Tryna improve. Gas? Hmm, we use that but mostly Petrol.
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Post by lillyeddiescotty on Oct 26, 2009 7:01:46 GMT -5
I cant wait for more. Very good story
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Post by lillyscotty on Nov 8, 2009 23:04:49 GMT -5
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Scotty was outside, on the porch sitting on the steps. He turned we he heard a cough. As soon as he saw Lilly, his eye nearly popped out of his head. Lilly was dressed in a brown bikini with white patterns on the sides. He looked her up and down, taking in her extremely long, luscious legs. He moved up to see the creamy white skin on her lower torso, finally looking up at the small gap between her breasts. He breathed in reaching her face. A small red blush had crept up to her cheeks, making her turn away when he looked into her eyes. “Wow...you look...nice.” Scotty whispered, trying not to say anything inappropriate. “Uh, thanks.” Lilly walked down the down the steps, stopping in front of Scotty. “So, ready to teach me?” “Yep.” Scotty walked slowly behind her, watching her body as she walked. He didn’t know what had gotten into him but he couldn’t keep his eyes off of her. He always knew she was stunning, but seeing in her in something else – not her work clothes – made his libido crazy. She looked breathtaking, heart-stopping...just gorgeous. Once Lilly reached the shore, she turned to Scotty. “Where do we start?” Scotty lifted the t-shirt from his body and removed his pants, leaving him in nothing but a pair of black shorts. Lilly held back a giggle as she watched the rippled muscles from his chest move. Lilly had never seen such a fit guy in her life. “Well, we’ll go in easy, take it slow, when you’re ready, we’ll go further.” At first Lilly took it the wrong way, her head racing, however when she regained composure she realised what he was talking about. “Okay, let’s go.” Scotty took her by the hand, slowly leaded her into the water. Once she was halfway in – the water up to her hips – Scotty wrapped her hands around his waist. He lay back in the water, floating as Lilly whimpered with fear. “Just relax, hold tight and concentrate.” Scotty whispered, starting to swim backwards. Lilly watched as he glided along the water, feeling his body against hers. After a few minutes of lying on Scotty, Lilly felt herself being pushed forward. She started to panic, never have telling anyone her fear of water. Scotty held her waist, helping her stay up. “I’m going to let you go, see if you can stay above water.” “NO!” Lilly screamed, clinging to him. “Hey, it’s okay. I won’t let you slip.” Lilly looked into Scotty’s eyes. They reassured her, warming up her body. Slowly Lilly felt the arms around her waist slip and her body started to fall. Scotty captured her and pulled her up. “I told you I wouldn’t let you slip.” “Can we go back inside?” Lilly asked shivering. “No, not until you are able to swim.” Lilly felt the hands around her waist slip again, however this time, she stayed up. She looked up at Scotty, smiling as he swam away from her. “That's not funny.” Lilly pouted, starting to get scared as he swam further away. Instantly Lilly tried to push her hands forward, trying to move. Nothing happened. She felt the water reach her chin and she started screaming. “Lil, look at me.” Lilly looked up to see Scotty at least 3 metres away from her. “You can do it okay.” “Scotty...Help me.” Lilly cried. “Concentrate, you know you can do this.” Lilly pushed harder, kicking her legs as she went. She felt herself moving and swam straight into Scotty’s arms. “See, I told you, you can do it.” Lilly clutched Scotty helplessly, feeling her eyes start to water. “We’ll go back in now, but maybe later or tomorrow we’ll practice some more.” Scotty held Lilly as he lifted her out of the water. As she stood up he saw the tears in her eyes. Scotty unconsciously leant forward and held her face. He let his hand trail up to her eyes, brushing the tears away. Scotty was a few centimetres away from her lips. He looked down to see her pouty, soft lips. He desperately wanted to lean down and kiss her. He closed his eyes and slowly lent down... Before he reached her lips, he felt Lilly push him away and move backwards. He opened his eyes, to see her glare at him. “Sorry.” Scotty whispered, watching as she punched him playfully. “Don’t get your hopes up Valens. Just ‘cause you’re along with me doesn’t mean you have to hit on me. They are plenty of other girls here.” Scotty’s heart sank, wanting to tell her she was the only one he wanted. He walked back into the cabin, ordering room service as Lilly headed of the shower. **************************************************************************
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Post by channelkid on Nov 25, 2009 12:44:58 GMT -5
I love your story and I really hope you go on with it - PLEASE?
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Post by lillyscotty on Nov 25, 2009 17:35:44 GMT -5
I love your story and I really hope you go on with it - PLEASE? I guess it wouldn't hurt! ************************************************************************** Lilly had been in the shower for 5 minutes and Scotty was already missing her. While waiting Scotty wondered what she would look like naked. He pushed the thoughts away, knowing they were wrong. Another 5 minutes later the curiosity was coming unbearable for Scotty. He slowly walked to Lilly’s bathroom, trying to be quiet. There was a crack where the door was open. Scotty quietly pushed it open, gasping when he realised the shower was see through. Scotty watched as Lilly rinsed the shampoo out of her hair. He let his eyes wonder down her body, taking in her creamy white skin and curves. He looked up to her right shoulder, not able to see the scar from the shot. He looked closer and saw a scar run over the small of her back. Scotty felt his heart beat faster as he saw his partner in a way she would never let him. As Lilly finished cleaning herself down, Scotty saw her turn of the water. He quickly stepped back, running back to the couch. When Lilly came out to the lounge, she was dressed in sweat pants and a tight tank top. The way the tank top clung to her upper body made Scotty’s mind wonder back to her in the shower. Scotty cleared his throat. “I uh...Ordered room service.” “Thanks.” Lilly whispered, snatching the remote from his lap. Lilly turned on the TV, flicking through the channels. She finally let it rest on a day time movie. “Ever wonder what would happen if something major in your life didn’t happen?” Lilly asked, looking at the floor while biting her nails. “Sometimes.” Lilly looked over at Scotty, seeing the pain in his eyes. “What?” “Sometimes... I wonder what would have happened if I didn’t get wit’ Chris.” “I guess we would have gone on the same.” “I don’t think so.” Scotty mumbled, looking over at Lilly. “Things would have been different.” “How?” Lilly asked, curious where he was going to take the subject. “Well, we might have got together.” Lilly chuckled, stopping when she saw the seriousness in Scotty’s eyes. “That wouldn’t have happened.” “You never know Lil. Maybe if I told you how I felt, things would have worked out.” “How you felt?” Lilly asked, staring into space. “I chose the wrong sister. You were the one I wanted.” Lilly breathed in. Before she could answer, a knock came at the door. “That’ll be room service.” Once they had finished eating, Scotty headed for the shower. When done he knocked on Lilly’s bedroom door. “Come in.” Scotty walked in, seeing Lilly curled up on her bed. “Wanna go for a walk?” he asked. “Give me a few minutes to get changed.” Lilly replied without hesitation. The images of her in the shower flashed into his mind. He quickly darted out of the room, resting his head against the cold wall. Every time he looked at Lilly, her pleasant body came into his mind. He looked up to see Lilly looking at him weirdly. “You okay?” she asked concerned. “Yeah, just thinking.” Scotty led her outside, taking the lead as they walked in the sand. Things were awkward, no one saying a word. He slowly moved closer to her, entwining his hand hers. Initially Lilly pulled away, feeling weird with the sudden contact. However, she put her hand back, tangling it in his when she started to feel lonely, wanting to feel him touch her somehow. Scotty smiled, pulling her closer as they walked the shore. “Lil.” “Mmm.” She whispered, her head resting on his shoulder as they walked. “Do you have any more scars, not including the one from the shot?” Lilly’s head shot up. She stopped in her tracks, staring at him suspiciously. “Why do you ask me that?” “Just wonderin’.” Lilly tousled her hair back, pulling his hand and wrapping it around her waist. She continued to walk, thinking about what her answer would be. “I have one.” “What from?” Scotty asked, tightening his grip on her waist. “You know my 49 report. Well yea...from when I was attacked.” “Oh.” Scotty whispered, smoothing her hair back. “Sorry.” “Nah doesn’t bother me. You should know.” Lilly mumbled. “Just one question. Why did you ask me that?" “Came into my mind.” “My scars just came into your mind, out of the blue.” Lilly asked chuckling. Scotty then realised how utterly stupid his question was. “I don’t know. I was just thinking.” “Mm-hmm and I just wanted to know if you had any tattoos.” Scotty tugged at her shorts, making them fall just below her hips. Lilly pushed him away, laughing as she secured them. “Don’t try those moves on me Valens.” She teased, running away from him, leaving Scotty to race after her. *****************************************************************************
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Post by channelkid on Nov 26, 2009 15:17:19 GMT -5
Thank you very much for the update. Another great chapter. That is such great work. You rocked my day today. Hope for moore soon.
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Post by lillyscotty on Nov 29, 2009 18:12:06 GMT -5
***************************************************************************** When Scotty had finally caught Lilly, he tackled her to the ground, making her whimper as he crushed her body into the sand. “poo poo, did I hurt you?” Scotty asked, his eyes travelling over her body making sure she was wounded. “No.” Lilly reached up and ran her hand through his hair. Scotty stared in amazement as she pulled him closer. He went to lean down when she pushed forward, making him fall on her back leaving Lilly straddling him. “You must be really desperate if you are gonna go after me.” “I ain’t desperate.” Scotty whispered, clutching her hips. “Smooth moves.” Lilly slowly lifted herself up, helping Scotty stand up too. As they re-entered their cabin Lilly jumped on the couch, taking up the whole room on the piece of furniture. This left no room for Scotty. Scotty – being his cocky normal self – went over to the couch and sat on Lilly’s legs. Lilly screamed as he squashed her thin legs. Scotty laughed, standing back up, as he walked away he mumbled. “That’ll teach you to stop being a –“ Before Scotty could finish his sentence Lilly jumped on his back. Lilly held on tight as he walked into the bedroom. Scotty collapsed onto the bed making Lilly giggle as he tried to catch his breath. Lilly crawled over next to Scotty, lying down. “You act different when you’re not at work.” Scotty whispered, still trying to gain his breath. “At work I’m professional, here I’m...kinky and fun.” “Kinky?” Scotty asked, his senses wakening. “Get your mind out of the gutter. I meant like, entertaining. I’m not scared to show more of my fun side.” Lilly sat up, looking over at Scotty. “I’ll give you a little preview.” Lilly crawled onto Scotty, slowly running her hand up and down his chest. She leant forward, inches from his mouth. She agonisingly rocked her hips, making Scotty want more. Lilly let her lips find his neck as she placed tender kisses down the column of his neck, then reaching his collar bone. Slowly she made her way back up to his lips. Scotty closed his eyes, leaning forward. “I’m hungry.” Lilly whispered, getting of the bed. Scotty groaned as she walked out the bedroom, making him crave for her. Lilly knew exactly what she was doing. She hoped that Scotty would play along with her, giving her the pleasures of messing with him. She found it fun to watch him squirm with excitement, but inside she wanted it as much as him. ***** As Scotty walked back into the lounge, he found Lilly lying on his bed. He saw her smirk and shook his head as he lay on the couch. “Order room service.” Lilly ordered huskily. “You do it.” “No!” “Stop being lazy.” Scotty groaned. “Do it yourself.” “Fine. You just won’t get more of the preview tonight.” Lilly teased. Scotty opened his eyes, seeing her pick up the phone. He watched as she ordered sandwiches and ice cream for afternoon tea. Once she was down she walked over to him. “You don’t get any preview tonight.” “That’s unfair.” Scotty mumbled, glaring at her as she took two steps backwards. “Your lose.” She whispered, finding the hem to her tank top. Before Scotty knew what she was doing, she lifted it over her head, leaving her in nothing but her bikini top and her cut offs. Scotty gasped as she walked backwards into her bedroom, closing the door behind her. **********************************************************************************
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Post by channelkid on Nov 30, 2009 14:38:44 GMT -5
Wow, what a great part of the story. It was really fun to read. Lillys funny side - poor Scotty. Please update soon :-) Thank you very much for this funny and great story!
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Post by lillyscotty on Nov 30, 2009 18:39:44 GMT -5
Scotty knew that Lilly was just toying with him, but he couldn’t help but want more. He knew the next two weeks were going to be hot. He heard a door squeak and turned to see Lilly. In her hand was a bottle of champagne and two glasses. She casually walked towards Scotty. Gently, Lilly pushed her body onto his, sitting in his lap. Lilly opened the champagne, the cork flying across the room. As Lilly poured her and Scotty a glass, she smirked watching Scotty shiver with anticipation. Gulping down his glass, Scotty pushed Lilly to the side. He ran to the little ice-cooler. He opened it, taking out 4 bears. He placed two on the table, tossing Lilly one. As they both knocked back their drinks, Scotty knew that somehow – tonight – things were going to get out of control. After 20 minutes, both Lilly and Scotty were heavily drunk. Lilly felt her head spin as she watched Scotty rest on the couch. Before she knew what she was doing, she leaped onto him, straddling him as he looked up in surprise. Lilly instantly reached down, pulling Scotty in for a deep kiss. Scotty pushed her back, groaning as they both fell onto the floor. Lilly winced as Scotty’s muscular body crushed hers. Scotty ran his hands through her hair as his lip found hers. “Bed...bed---room.” Lilly whispered. The soft attack on her neck did nothing to help her self control. Scotty lifted up, pulling Lilly with him. As she wrapped her legs around his waist, Scotty pushed her into the wall. Lilly giggled as she felt her body burn with Scotty’s touch, ** As Lilly awoke, she flinched as the sun flickered through the curtains. “Morning sunshine.” Scotty whispered, smoothing her back. “Morning.” Lilly whispered, moaning. Lilly twisted in the bed, cuddling up to Scotty. Scotty rubbed the small of her back feeling his heart jump for an unknown reason. “Last night was...interesting.” Lilly mumbled into Scotty’s neck. “In a good way?” “Yep.” “Well then, I guess we might have to do it more often.” Lilly giggled, sitting up and pulling the blanket with her. Scotty followed her steps, wrapping his arms around her waist as she rested into him. “I think you’re right.” Lilly looked back, her eyes finding Scotty’s. ** The rest of the week went the same, the two constantly flirting, making love and walking along the beach. Lilly found it almost unbearable to be in his presence without feeling like the sexiest woman in the world. However, this all changed when it came to the last day of their trip. As Lilly was packing her things she heard Scotty’s voice yell out. “Lil...wanna take one more walk along the beach before we leave?” She let her things go and entered the lounge. Scotty was sitting on the bed, his things already packed. “What for?” “I don’t know, one last time.” Lilly hesitated, biting her lip. “Alright.” She said hoarsely. Once they reached the shore, Lilly and Scotty made their way through the think sand. Lilly felt Scotty entangle his hand around hers. Immediately she pulled back, stopping. “What?” Scotty asked. “What’s gonna happen when we get back?” “What’s happenin’ now.” Scotty reached for hand but yet again she pulled away. “Just keep sleeping together. Nothing more?” Scotty noticed the hurt in her eyes. He never realised it would get this serious. “I didn’t think you wanted more.” “What if I do?” Lilly asked, her eyes flicking from his eyes and the sand. “I guess we could try.” “Take it slow?” Lilly asked, her lips turning into a soft smile. “Take it slow.” Scotty whispered, capturing her hand and making sure she wouldn’t pull away. “Take it slow.” Lilly repeated, quietly. *******************************************************************************
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Post by channelkid on Dec 1, 2009 15:04:16 GMT -5
Yeah, a new and great chapter. I really enjoyed it, too. I hope for more Lilly/Scotty in a good way. They are so cute together :-)
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Post by lillyscotty on Dec 1, 2009 17:31:35 GMT -5
Walking into work was harder than ever for Lilly. Trying hard to hide the recent events and their new relationship was harder than they had expected. Every time Lilly looked at him, her heart skipped a beat. Scotty could tell she was mentally undressing him; however all that did was put off his concentration.
At lunchtime things had come so agonizing the two met up in the storage room. As the two kissed passionately, Lilly felt Scotty’s hands running through her hair, making her moan in pleasure. “Well I’ll be damned.” They heard a voice say. Lilly opened her eyes, letting go of Scotty. The two separated, both looking dazed. Nick looked at them, his eyes taking in their muffled state. He started to laugh, until Lilly broke the silence. “Don’t tell anyone.” Nick stopped laughing, looking at her suspiciously. “On one condition.” “What?” Lilly asked. Nick paused, straightening his jacket. “You gotta let Rush go out with Rob.” “What?” Scotty burst out. “Hell no!” “Who’s Rob?” Lilly asked. “He’s my new poker mate.” “Poker? Since when did you play poker?” Lilly asked. “Since now.” “I don’t even know him.” “Well he’s seen ya around, really got the hots for you.” Nick wiggled his eyebrows, failing to hold back a chuckle at Scotty’s fist clenching. “Relax Valens, it’s just one date.” “She’s mine. She’s not going on any dates with anyone but me.” “Alright, I guess I have to make a stop at someone’s office before interrogating Johnson.” “Wait.” Lilly whispered. “One date only!” Nick smiled, leaving the couple alone. “What the hell?” Scotty asked. “Come on Scotty. What do you think will happen?” “They can’t separate us if it doesn’t interfere.” “But it is interfering.” Lilly turned around, letting her head rest against a few boxes. “We’ll get through it.” Scotty put his hands on her hips, turning her around. “Just need to concentrate on being professional.” Lilly sighed, finally giving in. “I hate you.” “Why?” Scotty asked. “You always make me give in.” Scotty chuckled, swaying her hips. “You got rhythm Rush?” “No.” Lilly pouted, trying to push away his hands. Scotty clutched harder, moving her hips in time with his. “That’s too bad. I wanted you to bring me game.” “Well I got no game.” “You really gonna go with Rob?” Scotty asked, stopping his movements and smoothing back her hair. Lilly groaned. “I have to.” “...” Silence over took them, Scotty staring into her eyes as Lilly stared at the floor. “Is he good looking?” Lilly asked. Scotty hesitated, knowing that Rob was an incredibly handsome man with a lot of woman lining up for him. “I guess.” “Don’t look so serious Valens. Only one man has a pass to my panties.” Scotty chuckled capturing her lips in a deep, heartfelt kiss. “Better get back to work.” He whispered, resting his forehead against hers. They partners took one last kiss before returning to their job. ***********************************************************************
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Post by channelkid on Dec 2, 2009 16:25:24 GMT -5
Oh yeah, they are so cute together. And Nick blackmailing Lilly into a date with an incredibly handsome man? I can't believe it. I hope Lilly get just through it and back to Scotty :-) Can't wait for more Scotty/Lilly-fluff. We don't get in the show, but in your fanfic. Thanks!
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Post by lillyscotty on Dec 3, 2009 21:01:47 GMT -5
It was the night of the date. Lilly was getting ready whilst Scotty sat on the couch going over the case. When he heard Lilly’s footsteps he turned. Lilly had dressed up in purplish dress that flowed. Scotty felt jealously hit him as soon as her saw her. Her hair was down, slightly curled. “Don’t get like that.” Lilly cried. Scotty turned back around, reading through files. Lilly walked to him, standing in front of him. “Trust me. Nothing will happen.” Scotty still didn’t say a word. “Scotty!” Lilly almost screamed. “I promise, I’ll tell him not to expect anything.” Scotty pushed the files aside and stood up. He lent down and kissed Lilly. “I know.” He whispered. Sitting back down, Lilly sat down on his lap. Scotty reached around her and placed the filed on her lap. Together the two went over the files waiting for Rob to arrive. ** When a knock came at the door, Lilly stood up. She reached down, kissed Scotty and whispered. “I’ll be home early.” As Lilly left, Scotty still felt the wave of jealousy hitting him. He paced around the room. For what seemed like hours Scotty thought about Lilly. He knew he shouldn’t worry but the thought of Lilly in another man’s presence made his heart rip. Finally he couldn’t take it anymore. He grabbed his keys and drove to the restaurant Lilly and Rob were dining at. As Scotty pulled up he looked through the windows. He couldn’t see them so he went inside. As he entered the doors he sighted them. In the corner was a handsome Rob handing Lilly a glass of champagne.
Scotty took a seat at a nearby booth, ushering the waiter away. Hiding behind a menu, he watched the two talk quietly. Whenever Lilly laughed out loud, he felt a wave of hurt fulfil him. After 30 minutes he watched Rob place his hands on top of Lilly’s. Lilly instantly pulled away. Scotty didn’t know what Lilly was saying but by Rob’s reaction he could tell it wasn’t nice.
When he saw the two stand up, Scotty rushed outside, hiding behind a plant. Rob walked Lilly to the car, pushing her against. Rob held her hands in place, reaching down and placing a rough kiss to Lilly’s lips. Scotty saw Lilly try to squirm out of it but Rob wouldn’t budge. Scotty was about to burst between them when Rob stopped. He heard his voice. “You’re lips are sweet.” “Screw you.” Lilly pushed him, Rob falling back on the ground. Lilly started to walk off, not caring where she was going. “You can’t walk by yourself.” Rob warned. “Watch me.” Scotty hid his head under his jacket and walked after Lilly. A few steps behind her he grabbed her arm. She screamed out pushing him hard. “Lil....shh.” Lilly stopped. She clutched his arm. “What? Why are you here?” Scotty didn’t say word. Staring at his girlfriend, he guided her to his car. Once inside he started it up, speeding into the darkness. “Were you spying on me?” Lilly asked. “I just wanted to see what was happening.” “Can’t you trust me?” Lilly asked, turning towards him. “I do...I just...I wanted to see if he would try anything. And he did.” “It doesn’t matter. I didn’t do anything back. You should have known I wouldn’t have let him.” Scotty sighed, driving faster. “Yeah Scotty, just speed, I don’t care if we end up dying.” Lilly groaned rubbing her saw head. When the two arrived home, Lilly went inside, locking Scotty out before he could get inside. Scotty drove home, feeling utterly stupid for doing what he did. He knew tonight would be a rough night for him. ***********************************************************************
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Post by channelkid on Dec 4, 2009 16:26:49 GMT -5
Yeah, they are so cute together. Why must Scotty be so stupid? He shouldn't go after her. But, I like how he is - overprotective. He is jealous, so he loves her. I hope they can sort it out? I need fluff! Please! :-)
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Post by lillyscotty on Dec 6, 2009 17:45:02 GMT -5
The couple had been fighting for ages. Scotty was staying at his apartment most of the time and Lilly ignored him as much as she could.
On a Friday evening once the team had left, leaving Lilly and Scotty alone. Scotty backed Lilly into the interrogation room, hoping to sort it out. “You gonna act like this forever?” Scotty asked. “Like what?” “Don’t give me crap Lil. I’m sick of walking on eggshells around here. We’re either together or not.” Lilly looked around the room and sighed. “I can’t handle you anymore.” “Lil, you barley gave me a chance.” “Scotty you don’t want to get too involved with me.” “Why?” he asked. “I’m not good in these sorts of things.” “Doesn’t mean we can’t try to figure it out.” “I ruin it all the time.” Lilly protested, fiddling with her hands. “Maybe this might be different.” “It won’t.” Lilly yelled. “Give us a bloody chance!” Lilly let tears fall from her face. Scotty walked forward and wiped them away. “Please, don’t give up on me now. Don’t give up on us.” Scotty let his head fall against hers. “I don’t want to get hurt.” Lilly admitted. “You won’t, I promise.” Lilly placed a soft kiss to his lips, and before she knew it, the sweet kiss and turned into a heated passionate one. ** The next day while Lilly lay in bed, Scotty made breakfast in the kitchen. Lilly’s head was aching for some unknown reason and she felt like throwing up. She rested and went through files while she waited for her food.
Another 10 minutes later and the smell of eggs came from downstairs. Lilly grew hungrier, impatient and anxious. She searched on the floor for Scotty’s pants and found his wallet. She opened it and there stared at her a picture of Scotty and Elisa. Her heart sank knowing that he would always love her no matter who came into his life. She pulled out the picture and noticed a few more behind it. She pulled them out and went through them. One was of a few people including Scotty and Elisa, another one of the couple on a beach, and another with Mike. She went through the wallet and finally found a picture of herself and Scotty. It was clearly from a while ago by her hairstyle. Scotty had his hands around her waist and her head rested in her shoulder. When she heard the footsteps on the stairs, she quickly shoved everything back in the wallet and threw it on the floor. “Hey gorgeous.” Lilly turned and smiled. “Finally, you took ages.” “Well I needed to make it perfect, didn’t want it to make you feel any worse.” Scotty sat down the bed and placed the tray on her legs. Egg and bacon and bread lay on the plates. “Thanks,” the blonde whispered, leaning over and placing a soft kiss to Scotty’s lips.
As Lilly ate, Scotty watched. He watched closely as she picked at the food, making sure nothing was over or under cooked. This made him chuckle inside, but he couldn’t help but watch her. He finally tore his eyes away from her and looked at the ground. He then noticed his wallet on the floor.
He couldn’t remember taking it out or using it. He looked back at Lilly and saw her lost in her food. He quickly reached out his leg and dragged it over. He lent down and picked it up. Making sure Lilly was not looking, he made sure his back was turned to her and opened it. The picture of Lilly and him shined out and he noticed it the one of Elisa and him was gone. He took the photos out and observed the misplaced photos.
The thought of Lilly seeing the pictures of Elisa and him made his heart ache. He couldn’t remember the last time he had gone through his wallet but it definitely wasn’t recently. “Lil,” he whispered, turning around. “Mmm.” “Did you go through my wallet?” Lilly’s eyes widened and her mouth stopped chewing. “No,” she mumbled through her food. “The photos have been moved.” “What photos?” Scotty saw the hurt in her eyes as she gobbled up her food. “Nothing,” he whispered, placing it on the bedside table.
Scotty walked out of the room leaving Lilly all alone. She sighed and fought back her tears knowing that there was no reason to be jealous of Elisa. She wasn’t here anymore, no matter how much Scotty loved her, he couldn’t have her. So he’d have to settle for her, Lilly thought to herself.
Before she could finished her thoughts Scotty returned with a coffee. He passed it to Lilly but Lilly felt a strange feeling rise. She through the coffee down on the bed, soaking the doona and ran towards the bathroom. Scotty jumped back, scared of the hot coffee burning him. He stumbled into the bathroom and saw Lilly with her head resting on the toilet seat. He moved closer and held her hair back as she threw up. A while later she moved back into his arms. “I’m done,” she whispered, her voice crackling. “Since when does coffee make you throw up?” “Since now.” Lilly stood and washed her face while Scotty watched. “Maybe we should give today a miss, you know, so you can get better.” Scotty suggested. “I’m fine!” “No you’re not, it can wait to tomorrow.” Scotty walked out of the bathroom and Lilly sunk back against the door. Her head was paining and she was feeling extremely dizzy. She knew today would be a long day.
The next morning was not different, however this time, the coffee was not the thing that made her throw up. She woke up to paining in her stomach and ran into the bathroom. This instantly woke Scotty up. He held her back and rubbed her back as she threw up. When she finally sunk back into his arms, Scotty knew that something was right.
“This isn’t some bug Lil.” When Lilly didn’t answer, he decided to proceed. “I think we should go get a pregnancy test.” Lilly turned her head around and stared at him with disbelief. “You think I’m pregnant?” “Well you could be. The other night...” Scotty trailed off, knowing Lilly got the picture. “It’s your fault.” “My fault? How is it my fault?” “Well you didn’t want to use protection.” “You didn’t want to either. I gave you the chance, you said no.” “Bloody hell Scotty, I was horny, what do you expect.” Scotty stopped himself from replying and let his head drop. When he did look up, Lilly was crying. He immediately got up and pulled her into an embrace. “Hey, Hey, relax, it’ll be okay.” “No it won’t, I can’t have a baby.” “Maybe you’re not pregnant, we just want to make sure right?” Lilly’s cries grew louder and Scotty didn’t know if he would be able to calm her down. She had never gotten like this with him, never. He lifted her up and bought her over to the bed. “Look okay, if you’re pregnant, we’ll get through it, but it’s not likely.” After a minute silence Lilly looked up at him. “I’ll never be what she was to you, will I?” “What?” “Elisa, you’re never gonna love me like you loved her.” Scotty rolled his eyes and smoothed back her hair. “Firstly, we’re still early in the relationship. Secondly, I stopped loving her a while before she died. Thirdly, I already love you more than anyone else I’ve ever been with.” Lilly stared back at Scotty, giving no expression whatsoever. Scotty grew worried as she didn’t move. Luckily, it subsided when Lilly went bright red and smile appeared on her face. “Yeah?” “Yeah!” Lilly giggled and leant in for a kiss. When things started to get too heated, Scotty pulled back. “You rest, I’m going to get this test.” ************************************************************************************
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Post by princesschristmas on Dec 6, 2009 18:02:21 GMT -5
I have been reading this story for a while now and then decided that I should get an account just to tell you how much I love this story.
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Post by lillyscotty on Dec 6, 2009 18:04:23 GMT -5
That's really funny and sweet. Thank you, it's really nice to get good reviews, makes my day.
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Post by channelkid on Dec 8, 2009 12:06:13 GMT -5
A new chapter and a great one! Thanks for this fanfic I really enjoy it and can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is really great. Sorry for my lack of english words, it's not my language. I can read and understand english very well, but write in english it, its not my talent. ;-)
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