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Post by eurache on Jan 18, 2006 22:38:05 GMT -5
Wow!!  DF great job :smile39: I'm up to chapter 12 and I'll be soon done..but you did a great job with dialogue, description, and you got how they would act... I'm not a fanfiction writer, but I do write Birthday stories at another board; I write little heavy romance type of stories with their fav characters on another show :smile20: But the story you wrote here is excellent.. Great Job DF :smile84: Keep it up!! :smile39: |
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Disasterfreak
Lilly's Bedroom 
I'm not her Ho [/b][/color]err.. Rerun Retard Ho [/b][/color]
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Post by Disasterfreak on Jan 19, 2006 22:17:03 GMT -5
Why thank you, Rock & Roll Hot Mama!  I'm trying really hard to get an update soon, but my days just got shorter... hopefully this weekend *crosses fingers*. |
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Lilly's Bedroom
I'm not her Ho [/b][/color]err.. Rerun Retard Ho [/b][/color]
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Post by Disasterfreak on Jan 28, 2006 22:45:47 GMT -5
Well, whadda you know, I actually came through this time. Guess that's one of the things not having a significant other is good for. Hehe. www.fanfiction.net/s/2349893/18/ |
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Lilly Rush
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Post by samanda on Jan 29, 2006 16:07:45 GMT -5
*round of applause for DF*
Thanks for the new chapter. It was excellent!!!
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Post by TVFan on Jan 30, 2006 15:37:49 GMT -5
Another excellent chapter DF! I really cannot wait to find out what Erica has in store for Lil or where she has been all these years! I thought your interrogation scene was first-rate and dead on to the authenticity of the show. I enjoyed peeking into Lil's mind during that scene as well. You stayed very true to her character with the whole leaving the personal stuff out of the investigating. It was clear that Lilly was seeing shades of her childhood and her mother, but you didn't beat us over the head with it, which fit the show perfectly as well. We all know CC is all about being subtle. I loved you description at the end with Lilly's bangs getting into her face. I could picture all of it!
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Post by sonny on Jan 30, 2006 16:44:15 GMT -5
I know I said it at the Source #1 chat yesterday but awesome chapter freaky!! I don't want it to end!! :smile88:
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Disasterfreak
Lilly's Bedroom
I'm not her Ho [/b][/color]err.. Rerun Retard Ho [/b][/color]
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Post by Disasterfreak on Feb 20, 2006 16:03:40 GMT -5
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Post by sonny on Feb 20, 2006 16:08:06 GMT -5
Eeeeek, how exciting!! This weekend I'm gonna read your story beginning to where you are up to so far, just to remind myself of everything going on so far. I read all 36 chapters of shamrockChilds story The Maze yesterday so I'm gonna do the same for yours and write a nice detailed review for you!! :smile41: :smile41: |
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Disasterfreak
Lilly's Bedroom
I'm not her Ho [/b][/color]err.. Rerun Retard Ho [/b][/color]
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Post by Disasterfreak on Feb 20, 2006 16:32:59 GMT -5
Awww, that's so nice of you!!! I'll be looking forward to it!
I've been meaning to do the same with The Maze but it's too long, I don't have enough time. And I feel I'm really missing out because of that. **sniffles**
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Post by sonny on Feb 20, 2006 16:40:02 GMT -5
Awww, that's so nice of you!!! I'll be looking forward to it! I've been meaning to do the same with The Maze but it's too long, I don't have enough time. And I feel I'm really missing out because of that. **sniffles** It took me practically the WHOLE DAY to read but it was well worth it. I couldn't help but read your next chapter! It's great. :smile49: There was me thinking Erica was still around!! Christina that B*t*h!! She is just so self-absorbed, when is Scotty gonna see sense and get rid of her??!! Great work freaky and when I've re-read the whole story I'll post a review at ff.net; do I need to register to review?? Cos I'm not registered. ;D |
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Disasterfreak
Lilly's Bedroom
I'm not her Ho [/b][/color]err.. Rerun Retard Ho [/b][/color]
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Post by Disasterfreak on Feb 20, 2006 17:00:00 GMT -5
Nahh, you can send in an anonymous review.
Sorry I had you going there about Erica Bailey. But if I made her show up there'd be no case... can't do that for a few more chapters yet. ;D
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classictvchic14
Desk Clerk II
Lilly Scotty Hottie [/center][/b]
Cold Case and Musicals aren't everything, but they're right up there with oxygen
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Post by classictvchic14 on Feb 21, 2006 9:51:35 GMT -5
LOL, I left my retarded and non-meaningful review for ya. Don't pay any attention to it at all, DF; it's pointless lol
When I ever read the part when that B**** Christina walked out of the elevator I literally screamed....That little, rotten, stupid...UGH!!!!!! I could have smashed the computer. Hahaha ;D
Like sonny, I had thought Erica was still around...you really had us going there!!! Anyway, excellent work as usual. If only I had the brains to write like you all do. lol!
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Post by TVFan on Feb 21, 2006 11:21:05 GMT -5
I too fell for the Erica trick disasterfreak. Excellent work! This was a nice set-up chapter and I can tell that there are some interesting things ahead. As usual, Chris has to come in and ruin everything - very true to character. You left us hanging again, but that's ok because it makes me excited to read the next one.  |
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Disasterfreak
Lilly's Bedroom
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Post by Disasterfreak on Feb 21, 2006 16:24:17 GMT -5
Thanks for the nice reviews guys! Sorry I set you up about the Erica Bailey thing. It was kind of a cheap trick, I admit. ;D I just couldn't resist. I'm trying to keep you hanging to compete with Schafferius. LOL, she makes me wanna update really fast, otherwise she might get to the ideas I was planning for myself before me (and then I'll be plagiarizing her--not the idea!). Unfortunately, I just don't have the brains.  Schaf--if you read this, don't stop updating. :smile84: |
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Desk Clerk III
Ray's Motorcycle Gal [/b][/color]
Nobody likes a blonde in a hampster ball
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Post by Rhi on Feb 27, 2006 1:14:23 GMT -5
haha i love it disaster. the whole Christina part though made me wanna scream..you write the characters so well. As for updating..its ok..we can be patient..kinda (that said..please update soon ) |
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Post by sukkerspinn on Feb 27, 2006 7:17:22 GMT -5
Added a little review for you! GREAT chapter! And thanks for the dedication |
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Post by sukkerspinn on Feb 27, 2006 7:41:08 GMT -5
Ok, there's gotta be something wrong with 1:my computer, or 2: FF.net. (I suggest the latter). Durn thing ate like half of my review!! Why? Am I not good enough for it? Does it have a problem with me? *whiiiiine* And what do you know, it won't let you submit two reviews. So now it just looks like I have very little to say and end the review in the middle of my thoughts. Arrrrg! I'll just post it in here instead then... Sowwy... "Oh, Duster, you're blowing me away!! Thanks for yet another exellent chapter, stuffed with all goodies!! (Except for that Christina... ewk! But I know your stand in it, so I trust you for future chapters without mush.  ) Ya really had me fooled about that Erica Bailey. I really though it was her! <_< And another cliffhanger.. How mean! Need more, need more! *sukker waiting eagerly for the next chapter* I thought it was very sweet of you to dedicate! (Won't say I don't know why...  ...) And the "big girls don't cry"-scene, neat. That's our Lilly alright! Yay to Duster!!" |
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Post by schafferius on Feb 27, 2006 8:57:43 GMT -5
 Hey DF...... You're a champion writer. I was reading this story ages ago and absolutely loved it. Only just realised you have added heaps more chapters. I adore the language you use, including the swearing. It is very original and the way you convey the baddies thoughts is excellent. The swearing makes it very dark and scary, which is hard to do. But I think you do it perfectly...... Can't wait for next chapter...... schaff Also just wanted to add that I agree: HAIR UP ALL THE WAY AND MORE GEORGE!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by schafferius on Feb 27, 2006 23:32:00 GMT -5
This is totally unrelated to the fanfiction section. But I hadnt the weirdest dream about you this morning DF. I kept waking up this morning next to my cat. But for some reason I thought it was called Disasterfreak and you were lying next to me (as a cat) while we were brainstorming ideas for a fan fiction story. CRAZY, I know. I think it is cause I was reading over your fanfic last night and I was also talking about my pet cat in the general discussion section. FREAKY!
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Disasterfreak
Lilly's Bedroom
I'm not her Ho [/b][/color]err.. Rerun Retard Ho [/b][/color]
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Post by Disasterfreak on Feb 27, 2006 23:37:03 GMT -5
ROFL. Maybe because my cat takes up all my life too? We may be more alike than we think. What year were you born in, Schaff? I think we could make a pretty interesting fanfic between the 2 of us. Thanks for your comment.... it was awesome! |
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DF great job :smile39: I'm up to chapter 12 and I'll be soon done..but you did a great job with dialogue, description, and you got how they would act... 
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