|
Post by Shorty on Jul 9, 2005 3:42:13 GMT -5
so are you going to continue or shall i?;D
its cooooooooooooooooooooooold!!!!!!!! (ok, nothing on the temperatures some of you guys get buts still...)
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Jul 9, 2005 3:42:40 GMT -5
dedycation for Shorty...
"Lilly, thank god your alright!"
"Scotty...?"
she wriggled slightly then relaxed
----------------
"You're alright... Thanks god..."
"Scotty... what happend?" she ask softly.
"I had a dream... bad dream. We can't stay here. We must go..."
"Scotty... Cats..."
"It's OK, Lil. They're go with us. Come on"
Scotty help Lil stand up, pack, they get cats and go to Scottys apartament where Lil ask: "This dream... About what was your bad dream?"
"About you... and this man but... Forget it" he said "Go to bed. You need more rest"
"I can't"
"Why?"
"I'm scare" she said and sit on the couch.
Scotty sit near her and take her hand: "Lil... Here you're safe. Come on..."
|
|
|
Post by Shorty on Jul 9, 2005 3:47:19 GMT -5
;D more please!!!!!!!! *resumes shivering* tea's to hot, everything elses to cold.....
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Jul 9, 2005 3:55:36 GMT -5
Shorty... more must write you... ;D I have no idea
|
|
|
Post by Shorty on Jul 9, 2005 4:23:11 GMT -5
i love heaters ;D hmm..... itll be short coze mums due back any second but im at my dads tomorrow so can write then and this is dedicated to...... *drumroll*........ RUDAXF ;D ;D ;D... without her, this ficion probably wouldnt exist buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz .......................................................................................... "is anywhere safe?" Scotty noticed her eyes were sparkling to much to be normal, he didnt think he'd ever seen Lil cry before and it hurt more than a punch to the guts. Gently he drew her over to him and held her .... Lilly could hear her heart beating fearfuly and she was on hypo alert-twitching at every sound. She didnt know what she would have done if Scotty hadnt been there, just thinking about it increased her terror so much she felt tears %#$%ling the corners of her eyes, she'd never felt like this before, always before she had kept her cool but now... it was like the floodgates had opened and had rusted in place, she hated not being in control of her feelings. Scotty drew her towards him and she relaxed, she was safe with him. He held her and she felt her fear gradually disolve. she was safe. ... Scotty felt her relax and couldnt help himself, he knew he shouldnt but he was no longer in control of his body. he lightly ran his finger under her chin, tilting her head up and looked deeply into her eyes, when he leaned in, she shivered slightly, smiling, he kissed her ......................................................................................... Rudaxf... please continue ;D :smile53: goodnight
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Jul 9, 2005 4:29:49 GMT -5
goodnight Shorty I can't cont this becouse I'll go on lake and I'll back tomorrow, late evening.
so... if someone want... please.. write here something!
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Jul 10, 2005 11:45:46 GMT -5
Ok I'm back! ;D and this is my cont
Scotty felt her relax and couldnt help himself, he knew he shouldnt but he was no longer in control of his body. he lightly ran his finger under her chin, tilting her head up and looked deeply into her eyes, when he leaned in, she shivered slightly, smiling, he kissed her ---------------- She smile. She was happy with Scotty hug her. She need someone, strong and safe arms. She need love...
"Thak you" Said Lil
"For what?"
"For your help... for everythig what you do to me"
"It's OK, Lilly. I like when you smiling" Scotty touch her cheek, gently "I love your smile and your blue eyes... I love you Lilly"
She open her eyes and look at him. He was so happy. She saw with he tell the truth about feelings to her.
"I love you too, Scotty..." she said and led her hed on his chest. Safe, comfortable, happy...
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Jul 15, 2005 2:43:08 GMT -5
Shorty... can you write here something? pleasee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
Post by Shorty on Jul 16, 2005 1:25:02 GMT -5
yikes! i confess- i nearly forgot about this thread *20 lashes with a wet busticket*, i just had this idea for a story in my head and i started writing and forgot about all the other storys, uumm..... will try to at some stage (giving a chance for someone else to have a go)
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Aug 29, 2005 11:05:42 GMT -5
where's next chapter? Shorty! please! write something!
|
|
blinddarkness
Officer I
Loves Lilly [/color]
This isn't the end, just the beginning...
Posts: 188
|
Post by blinddarkness on Sept 3, 2005 6:19:57 GMT -5
Hey everyone im new here and was reading the storys (they are really good by the way :smile39: ) and was wondering if i was allowed to contribute? I'm not sure if i will be as good as yous but would like to give it a try!
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Sept 3, 2005 10:59:40 GMT -5
great! welcome to the board!
|
|
|
Post by r2k on Sept 3, 2005 15:44:40 GMT -5
Hey there, blinddarkness,
This is R2K. I'm the moderator for the Fan Fic board. Anyone can post a fan fic here. Just make sure to follow the board rules regarding language. This is a fun section of the Look Again board. We come up with some very interesting stories. So welcome aboard and whenever you're ready, submit a fan fic. And don't worry about not being good. Everyone gets better over time.
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Nov 2, 2005 13:02:39 GMT -5
ok, ok ok ok ok ok
I'm realy tired but I write something. so now... can somebody continue this?
Valens look at her. She was so small, delicate and beautiful. In his arms she looks like a little, lost girl who need a lote of love. "Lil, I need tell you something" he said stroking her hairs. "Yeah? What?" she marmured half asleep. "Christina told me about you, her and Patrick, but I don't know ifs that truth" Lilly look at his eyes. Now she was realy scare. She hate talk about her past so much, but now she must do this. "What... What is she tell you?" Rush close her eyes and led her head against on his chest. "She told me, you was in work and he drunk to many beers and... They make a love in your bed. Is this truth?" Lil take a deep breath. "Yes and no" she said, tears in her eyes "I saw them when they make a love. And Patrick saw me. He... He stand up, naked, and beat me up" now she was crying "He beat me up! I was in love with him and he beat me up, pretty bad! I was in hospital!" "Shh... It's ok. It's ok. Everything will be ok. I'll never do.... you know I can't hurt you, right?" She nodded.
|
|
|
Post by Shorty on Nov 4, 2005 16:07:07 GMT -5
the next morning lilly woke up with someones breath tickleing her ear. Looking around, she saw Scotty, sound asleep. at first she couldnt remember what had happened but then memory came back like a flood
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Nov 4, 2005 16:12:21 GMT -5
She stand up and go to the bathroom. She feel like pathetic idiot who's only cry and shake. She want be a strong woman, like in past, before she meet Scotty. Valens opened his eyes. He reconized that Lil wasn't with him. He stand up. "Lilly?" he ask "Where are you?" He hear her in bathroom and go there. She was threw up in to the toiled. "God, Lil... What... You feel bad?" She noded.
|
|
|
Post by sonny on Nov 5, 2005 5:32:30 GMT -5
Keep going guys this is really sweet. Ahhhhhh my poor Lilly
|
|
|
Post by Shorty on Nov 5, 2005 7:02:14 GMT -5
Sonny- join in if you can, we would be glad ;D
|
|
|
Post by sonny on Nov 5, 2005 14:12:54 GMT -5
Sonny- join in if you can, we would be glad ;D When it comes to imaginative writing I'm not really very good!! I'd lower the quality!!
|
|
ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
I can always make you smile =]
Posts: 1,599
|
Post by ruda on Nov 5, 2005 17:28:55 GMT -5
can somebody cont this? ;D
PLEASE!!!!!
|
|