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Post by eduardodelroice on Jan 20, 2009 20:00:09 GMT -5
LII2- Plz, Finish it asap It's interesting...
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Jan 22, 2009 15:51:16 GMT -5
Next Chapter...
Without any more clues, it might as looked as if this squad couldn’t solve this case. That is until one night, when out of the blue someone crept behind Lilly; while covering both her mouth and neck; until she passed out cold. All that was left on the streets was her badge and gun.
However it just happened to be the same route that Scotty also took home, but tonight he found two of her belongings on the streets; along with a single drop of blood on the pavement. Scotty automatically knew that the cult had somehow devised a plan to kidnap her; preventing the rest from solving Madison’s murder.
In a dark place, Lilly awoke shivering slightly; while finding her lying on cold cement. Through her head was still extremely fuzzy, she knew she didn’t want to die. Once she got on her feet; Lilly wobbled a bit until feeling someone catching her.
“You never listen Madison; we’re going to teach you that”. Lilly tried to fight, “I’m not her”, yelling loudly, “I’m a Detective”, trying to sound strong. However the people didn’t listen; but continued chanting loudly before throwing her down onto the cold floor. From behind her was the symbol, before the door then slammed shut.
Back at the crime scene, Scotty kneeled over where his partner had been taken. He worried about Lilly, knowing that he couldn’t lose her. Though the blood was hers, but it was just a droplet; signaling that she was still very much alive.
“Doer probably used something to knock her out”, sighed Kat, “Just talked to that guy that Lil Interrogated early on, the guy seems to think that she’s Madison”.
Scotty looked up worriedly, “We don’t have much time”; before their phones buzzed signaling that they had found yet another body.
From there things didn’t seem as if they were any closer to finding Madison’s killer or finding Lilly; for that matter. One thing that they all had agreed on was that the cult was growing out of control and dangerous.
As the days came and went, Lilly sat there shivering and alone. Her stomach let out a small empty rumble, while she continued to figure out why Madison had to be killed. Upon getting up, Lilly ran her hands across the cold, hard walls; in search of something; quite possibly a hidden door.
However she was then disappointed but didn’t give up, knowing that even Madison had something that she had held onto.
Lilly remembered John Smith speaking about that, during their car trip; hearing how each of the victims held onto something important. Perhaps Madison did as well, but what was important that kept her tethered to this world?
If now it wasn’t for Antonio nor their children, then who was it? Perhaps the blind aspect of it wasn’t about really being blind but how love also was as well. What it was, Lilly knew she was much stronger to defeat these people and wasn’t about to let them destroy her. Not here and not ever; before finding out that the door had been unlocked.
Slowly opening it, Lilly could hear the same repetitive chanting as before. She listened but couldn’t make out any of the words; deep down she knew she had to get out of this place; quickly. While trying to find a way out, her eyes could see nothing but pitch black. Perhaps the blindness symbolized the darkness that was in this place. She then wondered if this place had existed when Madison was alive.
While Lilly was trying to find a way to escape, her squad was hard at work. It was Scotty whom was heavily reading through the diaries, but just about everyone whom had contact with her; also didn’t really care nor love her.
“It’s got to be hard, realizing at the end she had nobody”, feeling for Madison in a very solemn way,” Then why did Antonio come to us, if he didn’t really love her at all”?
“Guilt perhaps”, Vera said, biting into a doughnut as Kat groaned, “That was the last one”.
He turned seeing the now empty box, “I did ask, nobody wanted it”.
“Sure you did”, she said in disgust. While heading towards the break room, she then heard, “Like the time you ate my coffee Cake two years ago”.
Jefferies wasn’t in any kind of mood now, “Enough”, not wanting to hear anymore of the two of the bickering over a lost donut. When the phone did in fact ring; the squad all took in a breath of relief upon hearing that Lil was found safe and alive.
When she reached headquarters, Lilly received word that the place she had been too was now on fire. Something odd was happening and nobody knew why?
tbc..
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Post by eduardodelroice on Jan 22, 2009 16:18:15 GMT -5
interesting... waiting for the resolution
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Jan 26, 2009 10:03:45 GMT -5
There's a lot more chapters in this storyline...
Holding up a photo of Madison, Lilly could very well sympathize what she must had felt. Having someone she though she loved; whom toyed with her heart. Especially having children, which were only born to serve the agenda of the cult? After going through all the people whom would have it out for her, Lilly’s mind was about to explode.
Even Scotty couldn’t sleep, not after what his eyes had just seen; with the way the body was. To him he knew it had to be Antonio; but wasn’t sure anymore. Taking another sip of his now cold coffee, Scotty then took a seat across from Lilly’s desk.
“So what they think you’re her now”?
Lilly sighed, “Yeah kidnapped me and threw me a cold room. That symbol was there, and so was Antonio. Why did he come to us begging to reopen this case”, as Scotty then got up and snatched the photo out of her hand.
“You don’t look anything like her”, while noting that Madison’s hair had more reddish tones to it; which had been described in one of her diary entries. While continuing to read a section that had been written by Antonio, Lilly couldn’t still figure out if he really loved her or was simply toying with her emotions.
“I think I found something”, as a small shell slid out of the bindings.
The first time I’ve ever been the beach, it’s beautiful hearing just the waves of the ocean crashing at the shores. I had found this shell, because it had reminded me of you; how alone you are. Though one day, I know that you’ll be carried away; like the gulls do with shells; before depositing him across the warm sand.
Both Lilly and Scotty each exchanged glances, “So Antonio was already telling her that one day, she’ll be carried someplace alone”, before he threw down a crime scene photo of her, “Depositing her dead”.
“We can’t assume that Scotty, there isn’t any evidence that states that Antonio had killed her. Besides he’s cooperated with us; each and every time. Maybe it’s possible for him to be playing us”. Lilly let out a sigh, before Kat came in looking rather haggard but very much into solving this pain the neck case.
“Any love for us”, said Scotty wishing that he was at home right now; asleep. Kat groaned, “This cult has killed about twenty people between 1956 and now, these are some of the other pictures from the different crime scenes”, as the three of them compared and tried to decipher what was really going on.
When morning came around, everyone knew that Antonio wasn’t the father of Madison’s daughters. Though they resembled their mother down to a tee; Scotty knew that someone else was the father. Digging through vital statistics, he couldn’t find any birth certificates listed for both Sara and Megan. What was worse is that the birth certificate listed for Madison was a complete fake, after checking with social security and other sources; Scotty began thinking that she wasn’t whom she was.
“We could get a court order to exhume Madison’s body, run a DNA test against the daughters, and see if it’s a match”. Taking off his glasses, Stillman pondered for a moment, “That won’t happen, her body’s gone missing”. Arriving at the cemetery, a large symbol made out of human blood; was now cast over her gaping grave. With the cold air hitting the left side of Lilly’s cheek, she knew that these people were going to great lengths to conceal the real truth.
What took the cake was Megan showing up at Headquarters. As both Lilly and Scotty entered the interrogation room; they both weren’t going to put with her lies. “So Antonio isn’t your Dad”, Scotty said, “Is he”, while holding his tie back while taking a seat. Megan swallowed hard, “How dare you, he is”.
Lilly shook her head in disbelieve, “Then why isn’t there any birth certificate listed for you and your sister”? “We don’t believe in record keeping”, her voice now growling slightly, “or care to speak”, as she then got up and exited the room, leaving the two detectives skeptical. Scotty knew that Megan somehow was brainwashed to think that; but why change her story??
tbc....
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Jan 28, 2009 10:05:00 GMT -5
However when Scotty finally had found Antonio, he wasn’t about to be tricked into anymore of his mind games.
“Why come in and ask us to reopen Madison’s case”, asked Scotty?
Antonio took in a deep breath, his face now displayed a youthful older look to him, “Because I loved her, she wasn’t blind like I had said. She had to die, but I didn’t kill her; neither did they”.
“How are we supposed to believe you”?
The older man shook his head, “I did horrible things but it was my fault that I had let them take the babies from her. They were Madison’s; she deserved to be a mother. Things got worse for her, which ache never really went away”.
Scotty sat there listening, but still couldn’t decipher if Antonio was just a cold blooded killer,” Why did you even fall in love with her”?
“I was young like you, just had wanted to find someone different. Madison was just that, beautiful and mysterious like your partner”.
This automatically made Scotty feel compelled to protect Lilly, at all costs,” You had her abducted, why”?
Antonio looked at him, oddly, “They had someone do it, but I know that Detective Rush isn’t Madison. She doesn’t even look like her at all, but they think it”.
“Why”, Scotty asked but found that Antonio wasn’t about to give up the secret that his cult that kept all these years, “Then why cover things up, act like Madison didn’t exist but she did”?
Just then Lilly came into the room, slamming the door behind shut. She wasn’t in any mood to be dealing with someone that was now a complete liar. Plus the fact, Lilly needed to solve this case; and put this one to rest.
Throwing down a photo of the symbol, in front of Antonio, it caused him to push his chair back. Both detectives noticed that he was somehow afraid, “Get it away”, he growled. Lilly slid the photo closer, “Why, what DOES IT MEAN”, yelling loudly,” ANSWER ME “!!!
tbc..
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Post by eduardodelroice on Jan 28, 2009 15:08:36 GMT -5
It's a really interesting fanfic, just a little complicated but good
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Feb 9, 2009 8:47:24 GMT -5
Antonio looked up, quivering slightly. He knew if he had exposed this, the whole cult would be doomed. He didn’t want to be the one, which would reveal their dirtiest secrets. Plus being the one who had once fallen in love with Madison, he then decided to shut his mouth.
“ 1957, 1960, 1969, 1970, 1977, 1980,1981,1986, 1990, 1999, 2000”, throwing down each of the photos from the crime scenes, “ 2007, 08 and 09, all these” pushing the photos closer to him, “ Match the same exact way that Madison had died, “ revealing the crime scene photos of Madison’s murder.
This made Antonio slightly sickened, by seeing his lost love lying there dead. He knew she needed to be able to rest in peace, “I didn’t kill her, I loved her”.
Lilly shook her head, “A funny way of you expressing that, all she ever wanted was to be loved. You took that, took away her only chance of being a mother”, showing empathy and compassion for Madison. Although she never had known the victim, Lilly always had felt close to her victims; feeling a need to bring them to justice.
Upon taking out a book, Antonio then sighed, “She wrote all her feelings down in here, I saved it all these years. “Let now get off track here”, wanting him to confess, just then Vera opened up the door. As the two detectives then came outside; Lilly was now starting to see the big picture, here.
Upon coming back in, Lilly was almost ready to lash out on him, “You kill people, why kill an innocent woman”? “I didn’t”, Antonio yelled, “Losing Madison hurt me”. “Would you have really cared, doesn’t look like you even care about your daughters. Is that when Madison found out who you really were”?
Antonio nodded, “She knew why her mother had been killed; trying to protect her from us. Madison was only four, but never told a soul about this; except for me. Being locked in there her whole life, didn’t stop her from ever writing about it. Reading her stories, made you think that the world was all good rather than bad”, looking at picture of Madison.
“You kill people”, her voice was quiet and sad. A younger Antonio sits besides her, looking at her reddish long hair, “I wouldn’t hurt you”, touching her shoulder but now Madison is repulsed by his touch, “Sara’s alive, they made me lie”. Madison cries softly, “You took that from me; I just wanted someone to love me. Is that so hard”? “No, you aren’t meant to be loved”, show his true self.
By now Antonio’s eyes are solemn, “I had to tell her the truth, but she already knew it. That was the last time I saw her alive”.
Still the detectives didn’t have a single thread or fiber to make their case, Antonio was booked on the other murders; but not Madison’s. He now wasn’t about to name the rest of the members, who now had killed once again.
When the detective all arrived at FDR Park, Lilly instantly felt sickened by the bloodied, battered body that was protruding out in the open; but the method of killing was now different. The victim’s heart had been carefully extracted; before being cut apart on the cold, hard ground.
However it had been discovered later that the victim had been poisoned before this had occurred.
It now left the squad now wondering if Madison had very well been poisoned as well; if so who was the culprit?
With all these questions, Lilly turned back to the diary entries; trying to see if somehow Madison had named her killer, shortly before she had died.
As hours went on by, she sat there with her hair down; reading upon endless stories about; love, hope, happiness and sadness. It gave Lilly insight into how Madison had felt day to day; without ever experiencing what the world was really like. To her she imagined it so perfectly and well, that it made her wonder if Madison had gotten that chance to be free.
By morning, Stillman was surprised to find Lilly slumped over the desk; still reading through the diary entries. It had reminded him of how she used to be; up all night, her hair down and pouring through both the case and coffee.
“You find anything yet, Lil”, he asked while holding both a newspaper and a cup of coffee in his hand?
Rubbing her eyes, Lilly gave out a sigh, “Nothing, it seems like Madison had a vivid imagination boss. I guess she had to living in a place like that”, remembering how John Smith locked his victims up in that small room; how only one victim knew that she still had her in the end.
Perhaps this was true to Madison, that she also had herself but did the cult take that away from her as well? Lilly wondered that, even as both Jefferies and Vera came in arguing over him using up all the hot water in the apartment.
It wasn’t a good thing that Jefferies had let him stay over at his apartment; after all.
Plus the fact, Vera was starting to get on his nerves; a lot. Aside from that, Scotty came in, “This is a new look”, eyeing the fact that Lilly looked a bit disheveled from being here the whole night, “Staying late on this one Lil”?
“What’s it matter, this case is warranting me to do so”, as she then got up to pour some more coffee into her blue mug with yellow lining.
Somehow Lilly had found the next entry to be ripped out, “Hmm, there’s a page that had been ripped away; could be significant”, seeing that nobody else had thought so, “Look we need to find out whoever is responsible for her murder, Madison needs justice”.
Then Stillman came out of the office, “CSU just found Madison’s body, along with this”, showing the detectives picture of the symbol around it. Lilly remembered something, “Antonio got scared when I showed him the picture, and I don’t think it’s a good sign”.
“Or that it doesn’t exist, not according to the database”, Kat replied, “Antonio does have a colorful history; all his victims were male. That doesn’t make sense”?
As the hours then ticked on by, Lilly finally had found a page in the diary entry that suggested suicide; but she wasn’t so sure.
I can’t take it anymore, living in this darkness while Antonio goes and pretends that he’s some kind of a prince, but only I know the real him. He’s a monster, and so is everyone else. The mysterious drinks, I’ve been receiving aren’t drinkable; but tonight I just might drink it to end all the bitterness
tbc..
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Feb 9, 2009 22:10:00 GMT -5
While wiping away a tendril of hair from her face, Lilly now began to wonder if in fact Madison had killed herself. Then like a good detective, she knew that this was a setup; knowing that this woman would never had tried to harm her own self. However Antonio had even betrayed her in the end, but somehow both Lilly and Scotty weren’t buying his story one bit.
In fact, the two then had another stimulating conversation with him. This time Scotty sat down while Lilly stood up against the wall with her arms crossed.
“That day wasn’t the last time that you had seen Madison, was it Antonio”, Scotty asked, seeing how the older man sat there unemotional about this whole thing.
As he then sat up in his chair, Antonio expired a single breath, “So that wasn’t the time last time I had seen her, but it was at the club. Saw her by the doorway”.
Madison leans against the doorway, hearing the music for the first time. Her eyes watch people drinking, smoking and dancing; but then catch the slight of Antonio.
As he then walks over to her, the two take in a moment to savor each other’s looks. “How did you escape”, he whispers while looking over his shoulder, almost paranoid like. Madison shrugs, “I never realized just how wonder music really sounds, it’s beautiful”, while watching the band some more.
Antonio’s lips curl into a smile, “Would you like the dance”, he asks, “Then I could sing you that song I had written, just like in our stories”, as Madison takes his hand.
As Antonio had finished recounting that memory, his eyes grew sad, “I still miss her terribly, but I did get to sing that song to her. Madison loved it, the only one would didn’t mind me singing in Spanish”, which even made Scotty smile a bit.
Somehow Lilly knew that Antonio wasn’t the culprit after all, “Did you know where Madison had gone after she had left the club”? “No”, as he took off his glasses, “She didn’t like to be alone”, pausing to look up at Lilly, “like you”, which had the hardnosed detective shooting him glances.
Antonio went further to explain himself, “I can tell that your lonely, not wanting to feel that way. You have a heart full of love but everyone rejects you”.
Scotty looked up and saw that Antonio was right about his partner, but instead Lilly pretended not to let him get to her, “I told her not to leave, that she should have waited for me. That was the year that killer had struck Philly, killing 4”.
Behind the glass, Kat made a puzzling look, “A killer in Philly, think it’s some sort of a cover-up”, but Vera wasn’t so sure. As the two did some more research, something was about to be boiled to the surface but it had nothing to do with the cult; at all.
As the photos from the killings, had been displayed on one of the desks; Lilly’s eyes scanned through hoping to find a connection. “Wait, I think that’s the other half of the symbol”, as she then put two and two together. Stepping back award it revealed something, “A dream catcher”, which didn’t make a whole lot of sense.
In the other room, Lilly slid the picture in front of him, “Your cult wasn’t about killing, and it wasn’t even a cult was it”? “No, until several members of it went on a rampage.
I never killed anyone, didn’t have the skills to even remotely do a thing like that. That symbol was painted as a sign of protection; I know that it had started with Madison. She knew how to interpret dreams, make them into millions of stories”.
Lilly continued taking notes, “So who else knew about her talent”? “Nobody, I was the only one who had known about it. Two days before she had died, I would wake up feeling like I had lost my only love. Somehow that happened later on, never had gotten that back even to this day”, as Antonio sat back in his chair, saddened, “Sometimes I have these dreams about Madison, me and our daughters living together in our house in Maine”.
She could recall having one about her and Ray; but that was just a dumb pipe dream. That wasn’t going to happen; but just one of her teenaged dreams from long ago. Upon getting up, Lilly came out hearing the sound of a familiar voice.
“Louie, what brings you down here”, says it with a smile? Louie glanced over at the blonde, “Got a call Rush about this case, turns out the fire that had been set to the place was one of the places where your victim could have resided”.
As Frannie walked in, both she and Scotty teased each other, “Two days ago a body was found, I ran in through and it’s Madison's. No sign of any strangulation, but the pictures suggest a random killing”.
The squad each exchanged looks, “Did anyone go down for the murders during that year”?
“ Nope, doer probably bit the dust”, Kat replied before spotting something, which even made Lilly remember a case similar to what her theory might be, “ We had a case back a few years ago, 1980; about how the killer took the boy to the place where he wanted to be buried. Perhaps the killer took Madison to the club”?
Scotty chuckled,” That’s reaching Lil; perhaps she just was randomly killed in front of the club. Things do happen, drunks you know”?
Then the phone had rung, “I killed Madison”, the voice sounding cryptic. As Vera peered into the room, everyone now knew that Antonio wasn’t the only who had placed the call.
As Lilly then listened to the caller’s heavy breathing, she knew that this guy wanted to turn himself in already, “Why did you do it”, as she then heard the sound a click on the other end.
tbc..
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Feb 20, 2009 14:01:20 GMT -5
After putting a trace on the caller, both Jefferies and Vera groaned about headed up to Canada. Though it wasn’t fun; what the two didn’t like was the fact that they had to travel down long stretches of roads; before turning off onto another long dirt path.
While the two felt each bump, Vera groaned upon seeing a house in the middle. Although it appeared to be rundown, it could have been a nicer looking one if the owner had managed to put in some improvements on it.
Upon knocking, a man opened the door; with strange rashes and bumps all over his face. To Jefferies, he automatically knew that this guy had to be Madison’s murderer. As the two each took a seat, Vera then began questioning him. “I didn’t know her, she probably was one of my random killings that year”, as he then pulled out a picture of his victim, “Girl just wanted to be loved, that Latino guy was the one”, knowing that he had snuffed out Madison’s chance of being with her true love forever.
Vera knew that this man wanted to confess, “Tell me how you killed her, John”, knowing that this guy was now riddled with immense guilt, “The man that Madison loved misses her terribly. He never fell in love again, she was his true love”.
As John then took a deep breath, his hand began to tremble, “Take me back to Philly, then I’ll tell you”, knowing that it was the only way that he could confess. Upon arriving, Lilly met them there where Madison had died; right away John remembered had had killed a young woman back in the fifties.
“She was walking out of here, looking happy”, he started to say….
As Madison leaves the club proceeded to walk down the sidewalk, before collapsing. She then begins moaning in pain before John’s hands then cover her mouth. While her slithers trying to fight him off; until he stands up still watching Madison breathing harder. “Antonio”, she whispers, “Help me”,
Scotty then shakes his head, “So you’re saying that Madison was already dying, when you found her”? “Yes, I was only trying to take away her pain. She didn’t live very long after that after I had poisoned her from inside”. Lilly felt slightly sickened, “Madison wasn’t poisoned”, knowing that John was once again lying to their faces.
tbc..
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Post by eduardodelroice on Feb 24, 2009 11:12:59 GMT -5
Nice story... I hope the end is coming: It was excellent, maybe a little complicated
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Feb 25, 2009 12:35:00 GMT -5
Scotty had it with Antonio, as he then slammed the door to the interrogation room closed. Both men each exchanged looks towards each other, but neither one of them said a word. For moments at a time, the two just continued to ponder what the other one was thinking.
“My brother Manuel called Madison into one of the rooms before she left. She wasn’t feeling that well that day, but I didn’t think too much of it. You see Madison’s sickness would often reoccur; but I think that she was trying to end her life”.
The younger man listened but still didn’t quite believe Antonio, “She saw right into you, saw that nobody really care about her”, but once again Scotty’s theory had been debunked. Antonio knew that he wasn’t the killer, or even had wanted to see Madison dead, “It was her own sadness, but the only thing that made her happy was being with me. Together our love set us free”.
Scotty shook his head, “What did Manuel do, Antonio. I know its blood but do it for Madison; she deserves justice too right”?
Antonio took in a breath, “If I do he’ll kill me, losing Madison was the worst thing in the world, which my own brother could do to me. How he got that guy to chase her, but the other guy knew that love was the only thing keeping Madison tethered to this world”.
In the other room, Lilly slammed the large book down on the table in front of Manuel, “Thought you could fool us, but I never suspected it was you. Why kill the one woman that your brother loved, how you can just take away something that Madison longed for her entire life”.
Manuel looked at the blonde with bitterness and spite, “I didn’t kill her, and she had no business being with my brother. That girl was deserved not to be loved, by anyone. Madison knew it but instead I found out that night, about baby number three”. That new information startled Lilly, “She was pregnant, how”?
“How do you think, my brother knocked her up. It’s bad enough that she had already gotten pregnant twice”, he said, “That explains why she was so sick, but what people didn’t know is that she was diabetic”.
Lilly took in a deep breath, “So your saying that she went into a diabetic shock”, which would account for the other entries in her diary, “Or you are probably just lying to me face, trying to blame it all on a now fictional cult”.
She then got up, “Your nothing but a cold-blooded monster”, which immediately sent Manuel into a crazed frenzy, “I am no such thing, but she didn’t need to be loved. It’s a good thing that she never had that baby”.
“No you just took that from her; all Madison wanted was to be loved. Antonio was that person; in the end he loved her. Having that one dance; it was the one she had written about. Why take her dreams away”?
Manuel could see compassion in Lilly’s eyes but he wasn’t about to give up the reason; for why he wanted to kill the love and his brother’s life, “Antonio never fell in love afterwards; he never got over the loss of losing her. It’s his loss, you know now being single and alone”, moving closer to Lilly’s face”, Like you”.
A flash of George Marks slithered into the depths of Lilly’s mind; serving as a bitter reminder for what he had once said. This wasn’t the same, she knew that; besides she wasn’t all alone and bitter.
“TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED”, she yelled, slamming down both of her fists. In the other room, Scotty also was about to punch Antonio out; since he also was now acting odd.
tbc..
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Post by eduardodelroice on Feb 25, 2009 12:44:54 GMT -5
I hope the end is coming soon Nice fanfic
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Feb 25, 2009 13:15:12 GMT -5
Last Chapter!!
Antonio knew that he had to confess, but was afraid to reveal what really happened that night. Taking off his glasses, he then let out a sigh. He was now really to tell Scotty what exactly happened; on the night he had lost his true love.
“Later on that night”, as the scene then flashed back to Madison’s last night on Earth…
In a deserted area, Madison is already on the floor gasping. Manuel’s eyes are looking deeply into hers, before she tells him about the baby. Just then Antonio pulls him off of her, “She needs help”, seeing that her body is shaking violently.
“Leave her”, he said before Manuel then signals another unknown man to cover her mouth, “Watch”, as he holds Antonio firmly. His eyes gradually moisten with tears, as his mouth moves to form out the three words that she had longed to hear.
Madison still is fighting, “Please don’t,” before biting the man’s hand hard.
Antonio breaks free, but notices that there is a lot of blood on her dress. He rushes over to her,” I Love you”, finally admitting how he truly feels, before one the bed punch him hard in the stomach. As the other guys surround him, Manuel stands over Madison.
“I was being beaten up, but I heard Madison call out that she loved me”, his voice now breaking, “I think she was also suffering from a miscarriage, the blood loss seemed to be coming from that way”.
Scotty felt bad for Madison, but still didn’t understand why she had t o die, “What did your brother do to her”?
“He suffocated her with his hands, and then made me watch as she drew her last breath. You don’t know how terrifying it was to see the person you loved, do that. Our baby never got that chance nor did Madison”.
In the next room, Lilly now was going without either a bathroom or a lunch break. She needed both but instead knew she had to get a confession from Manuel.
As time then slowly passed by, he still didn’t confession. However Lilly knew how to exactly tick off a killer, “You hated her, because she wasn’t like both you and your brother.
Madison was strong, and not even being stuffed in that place took his spirit away. She believed in love and life and she found it with Antonio; but you weren’t going to let that happen. Or Let her be a mother; would you”.
Hs eyes glared, “She should have just run away”.
Madison is leaving the club, as Manuel then throws her inside of his truck. Automatically she trusts him, but as he looks over he sees her hand on her stomach. His anger rages, “I told you that you should have just left, why stick around”?
Her head turns slightly, “I love Antonio, why should I leave without him”, as she then keels over in massive pain. Nevertheless, Manuel continues driving while Madison groans in pain, “Please, get me to a hospital”, but knows that he isn’t going to simply take her there.
Somehow the truck then stops, as Madison gasps before collapsing onto the ground.
Just then Antonio comes rushing over, “Leave her alone”, noticing the blood, “She needs to get to a hospital”, before a group of Hispanic men knock him over.
Manuel then proceeded to place his mouth over Madison, “This will teach you a lesson, there is no such thing as love or happiness. You don’t deserve it and never will”, before hitting her hard on the stomach. Right away Antonio rushes over, as Manuel then forcefully holds his hand over her mouth. Madison struggles before her body goes limp.
As the other men continue to beat up Antonio, both Manuel and the other man take Madison’s dead body to the club; before she is left there...
The door then opens as Lilly escorts Manuel now in cuffs, while both Vera and Jefferies among other detectives also escort away various members of the cult. In the other door, Antonio is also being escorted out also in cuffs, for a murder that had committed. Down in the warehouse, Kat marks Madison’s box closed.
Sometime later, both Sara and Megan stand at the beach. They both have solemn looks on their faces, knowing that they never really had gotten a chance to meet their mother; whom loved them terribly. As Rush and Valens stand beside Antonio who is in cuffs; Lilly then sees Madison standing by the shore.
She looks happy while her hand rests on her stomach, before looking towards her now grown daughters. Both Megan and Sara also see her; noticing just how beautiful she once was.
Just as Antonio sees her, Madison smiles before disappearing along with the breeze; but very slowly he then bends down to feel the warm sand with his eyes closed; knowing that love was still blind.
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Post by eduardodelroice on Feb 25, 2009 13:23:00 GMT -5
Rating 9/10 Excellent fanfic! Loved the final part! I'm loving your other fanfic too. The only thing that I did not like much is that the case was too complicated in some parts but besides that Excellent. Loved the victim was seen by a lot of people
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