Post by longislanditalian2 on Jan 26, 2006 12:35:57 GMT -5
It was around midnight and Lilly Rush was fast asleep, the day was filled with the same stress ,The team recently opened an old case everyone was on the same page except lilly , In her mind the Scene with George still was going around in her mind, right into her dreams .In her dreams she could hear george but now she was in his criminal mind , screaming for help when she looked over she saw herself as the same 10 year old on her 49. Then george came at her witha knife and lilly screamed. Then lilly woke up and realized it was just a dream. Still haunted by the memory she looked at herself in the mirror and saw george , the mirror instantly shattered. Then her cell rang, scared and afraid lilly picked it up " hello " then sighed at the voice at the other end was scotty " Lil are you okay" he said concerned . In her mind she wasn't okay but could she tell the man who lied to her face, she forgave him but still didn't forget it . Scotty sighed and hung up he wasn't going to take any chances that she was in trouble he hurried to his car and drove to her house.
Lilly sat in the corner scared , as scotty approached the door
, the door creaked open he ran to lilly's side. " what happened" Lilly cried and said " the man " " He 's dead lil , you're not going to tell me that a ghost is after you" Lilly looked up at him and said " He's standing right in front of you , he's telling me that I'm like him " Scotty held lilly in his arms , she felt safe in his arms until she heard george's voice
she clug closed into scotty who spoke up " Leave her alone " Geroge laughed and pointed a gun , " i might be dead but I still have to finish something" Scotty rubbed lilly's back and said" Not Lil ,she doesn;t deserve this , leave her alone " George said" You know Lilly thought she shot me but it wasn't me " scotty looked at geroge at said " i know that you are dead " " I am dead , but I need to kill Lilly before I can rest in peace" Scotty picked up lilly into his arms and fled , lilly buried her head into his shoulders , scotty drove into a adbandoned house in the country . "Lil we should call boss" Lilly sat there shaken " No george will know " " how's that " " he can hear all my thoughts" "Lil he a ghost ,he can't hurt you" " i know but he isn't gonig to stop until He gets what he wants" For the remainder of the night , Lilly slept in his arms
then woke up scotty spoke up" I'm sorry lil I should have been with you instead of christina " she smiled then he kissed her and led him the the bedroom . Then next morning Lilly woke up in cold sweat as she looked around she found herself in the attic of george's childhood home tied up . she shouted for scotty but could not hear herself speak she drawed her knees up and cried. When scotty woke up he looked over and saw george standing over him " It's too bad lilly isn't here with you"
He got dressed and ran to the house , shouting lilly's name
he busted the attic door open but lilly was nowhere to be found . Until he heard her voice , he traced to a closet and opened it , Lilly grabbed his hand but scotty couldn't hear the words that were coming out of her mouth , He heard outher voices too like the victims that george had killed . The closet door slammed shut and scotty soon found himself outside of the attic.
Lilly sat in the corner scared , as scotty approached the door
, the door creaked open he ran to lilly's side. " what happened" Lilly cried and said " the man " " He 's dead lil , you're not going to tell me that a ghost is after you" Lilly looked up at him and said " He's standing right in front of you , he's telling me that I'm like him " Scotty held lilly in his arms , she felt safe in his arms until she heard george's voice
she clug closed into scotty who spoke up " Leave her alone " Geroge laughed and pointed a gun , " i might be dead but I still have to finish something" Scotty rubbed lilly's back and said" Not Lil ,she doesn;t deserve this , leave her alone " George said" You know Lilly thought she shot me but it wasn't me " scotty looked at geroge at said " i know that you are dead " " I am dead , but I need to kill Lilly before I can rest in peace" Scotty picked up lilly into his arms and fled , lilly buried her head into his shoulders , scotty drove into a adbandoned house in the country . "Lil we should call boss" Lilly sat there shaken " No george will know " " how's that " " he can hear all my thoughts" "Lil he a ghost ,he can't hurt you" " i know but he isn't gonig to stop until He gets what he wants" For the remainder of the night , Lilly slept in his arms
then woke up scotty spoke up" I'm sorry lil I should have been with you instead of christina " she smiled then he kissed her and led him the the bedroom . Then next morning Lilly woke up in cold sweat as she looked around she found herself in the attic of george's childhood home tied up . she shouted for scotty but could not hear herself speak she drawed her knees up and cried. When scotty woke up he looked over and saw george standing over him " It's too bad lilly isn't here with you"
He got dressed and ran to the house , shouting lilly's name
he busted the attic door open but lilly was nowhere to be found . Until he heard her voice , he traced to a closet and opened it , Lilly grabbed his hand but scotty couldn't hear the words that were coming out of her mouth , He heard outher voices too like the victims that george had killed . The closet door slammed shut and scotty soon found himself outside of the attic.
I think you should look for synonyms -- the word "mind" was used too many times. Is English your native language?
