blinddarkness
Officer I
Loves Lilly [/color]
This isn't the end, just the beginning...
Posts: 188
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Post by blinddarkness on Sept 21, 2005 5:11:06 GMT -5
This is my first fanfic so please be patient. Ok here goes... "Black Cat" 19 June '99 We're taken to a place where dances are being preformed. This dance in particular is a myth about a beautiful Egyptian princess and how she is murdered. A jealous man wants to rule the kingdom and in hatred and spite, murders her by poisoning her. He drags her to a river and surrounds her with lotuses. The Egyptian princess is left in the river at night, around her a black cat circles her, meowing. Later the same girl who played the part of the Egyptian princess is murdered and placed in a river, surrounded by flowers. There's a black cat, which sits watching her intently. We see her file being put away: Caine, S. June '99. Thats all i got so far. I'm trying to fix the story up so everything makes sense. *Note the myth isn't true, i just made it up
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Post by TVFan on Sept 21, 2005 11:40:20 GMT -5
This is a very intriguing start to a case file blinddarkness! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the story! Great job so far!!
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Post by madforties on Sept 21, 2005 14:18:20 GMT -5
Hmmmm...sounds good, I'm looking forward to reading this!!
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Post by r2k on Sept 21, 2005 18:00:09 GMT -5
I am interested in seeing how this one develops. Keep it up.
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Post by Shorty on Oct 2, 2005 19:16:50 GMT -5
ooooooo, more more more!!!!!!! it sounds great!
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