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Post by lillyeddiescotty on Oct 9, 2009 0:29:22 GMT -5
This story is about Lilly and Scotty and maybe about a case later
---------------------------- Scotty was off Lilly's door. He wanted to watch her because she did not come to work. He was worried about her. He went in and saw her sitting on the sofa with knees up to her breasts. Lilly looked at him when he entered.
"It was unlocked," said Scotty, he saw that she had been crying
He went to the couch.
"My mother died yesterday"
'Oh no Lil'
"I found her. She was alone when. I was sitting with her. She was so quiet. She could have phoned kontort. She could have called to my cell, she would not have died alone '
"You should know that it's not your fault '
"I should have been here Scotty"
"You did everything you could"
"I never got a chance to say goodbye"
"I'm here for you"
He took on her shoulder
"Whatever"
"Stay with me, Scotty"
"Okay"
He came next to Lilly and put his arms around Lilly and Lilly put her head on Scotty chest. She could hear his heart beat. She fell asleep and he did it also ------------------- please comment and it is my first fanfiction and I'm from Sweden so my English is not so good
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Post by lillyscotty on Oct 9, 2009 1:42:08 GMT -5
Ah, you changed the ending. Yes! That's what should have happened. I can understand your English, it was great!
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Post by lillyeddiescotty on Oct 9, 2009 2:06:36 GMT -5
Thanks
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Post by channelkid on Oct 9, 2009 16:05:16 GMT -5
I like this ending. I hope for more?
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