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Post by lillyeddiescotty on Sept 28, 2009 7:20:15 GMT -5
i hope scotty find her and they be togeheter again <3
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Post by irishgirl101 on Sept 28, 2009 10:53:39 GMT -5
they should get csi in nd get prints off the car lol! but im not worried i know scotty will save the day! he loves her to much!!  good plot btw! |
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Post by lillyscotty on Sept 28, 2009 19:03:05 GMT -5
Lilly awoke yet again to the same room. However something was different.
This time she was lying on a bed. Lilly tried to roll over but was overrun with pain.
She screamed in agony.
Lilly couldn’t move, something was terribly wrong.
She looked down to see her arm all purple, and full of blood. The top part of her arm, obviously where the needle had been put, was wrapped in wet cloth. Blood was soaking through the cloth and running down her arm.
It was draining her strength. She couldn’t move.
“Help!” she screamed. “Help!”
After a few seconds of waiting Luke came through the door.
“Please.” Lilly begged. “It hurts.” Tears were running down her face yet again. She had never cried so much in her life.
Luke walked towards her and slowly undid the cloth. When Lilly saw her infected arm, she screamed again.
“Shh.” Luke hushed.
He left her there like in that, in pain as he walked out of the door.
Lilly couldn’t handle the torture. He arm was stinging in pain.
Luke returned with another cloth and bandages.
He sat down next to Lilly and started cleaning the infected part of the arm.
As soon as the cloth touched her arm, it burned. She squeezed her eyes shut, trying to shut out the pain.
Before she knew it her arm was bandaged up and the pain was fading way.
“What do you want with me?” Lilly asked.
“For pure pleasure.” Luke said chuckling to himself as he walked out.
Lilly didn’t understand why she was here. She failed to understand what the pleasure of this was. Did they find pleasure in seeing her suffer? Did they want to torture her then kill her? There were so many questions she wanted to ask them, but fear swept over her making her petrified she would say the wrong thing then be punished for it.
At that very moment Scotty was searching a street two blocks for where Lilly was been held hostage. He didn’t notice he was so close to her. He was walking around asking shop owners and residents if they had seen any sign of Lilly. No one had noticed her.
He finally drove down the street Lilly was in. Lilly was being kept in a factory. There was a basement under the factory, a small room off that was where Lilly was in.
Scotty drove straight past the factory. He thought that would be too obvious for a kidnapper to keep his prisoner.
Lilly was sitting on the bed cuddling into herself. She was thinking of Scotty. She longed for him to find her. She sat there for what felt like days but in reality was hours.
Finally, a man entered the room. He grabbed Lilly and held her up. He pushed her out of the room into the basement. The basement was dull compared to the room she had been kept in.
The man pushed her onto the floor. She didn’t mind the pain anymore, she was used to it.
The men were whispering. Lilly couldn’t make out what they were saying.
“How far would you go to get out of here?” a man asked.
“I’d do anything.” Lilly whispered.
The room went quiet. The men looked at each other.
Lilly had no idea what was going to happen.
Suddenly, a man pulled her by the hair into another room which was also dull.
All that was inside of the room was a bathtub full of water.
The man lifted Lilly up, Lilly kicked and screamed but the man was too strong.
He placed Lilly into the bathtub, pushing her head as far as it would go.
The water was ice cold.
Lilly was drowning, her arms were trying to push him away but he wouldn’t budge.
She was desperate for breath. She couldn’t take it anymore.
Finally she let go, the world went black yet again. This time she knew it was the end.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Sept 28, 2009 19:03:44 GMT -5
I hope Lilly lives, don't kill her off
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Post by lillyeddiescotty on Sept 28, 2009 23:19:38 GMT -5
i hope scotty find her soon
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Post by scottylillyfan on Sept 28, 2009 23:27:18 GMT -5
I hope Lilly not gonna die.
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Post by lillyscotty on Sept 29, 2009 22:12:06 GMT -5
cotty lifted Lilly out of the bathtub. He laid her on to the ground, leaning down to see if she had a pulse.
She didn’t.
He started giving her CPR, beating on her heart and giving her mouth to mouth.
Tears were running down his face.
The team had received a call from an anonymous person telling them the details of Lilly’s location. The mysterious person, who was obviously a man, told the team Lilly’s state which was near death. It was Luke, but the team had no clue of this.
The team rushed to the factory, beating every door down. Scotty finally found the room Lilly was in.
The CPR was not working. He yelled for help, the team rushing to surround Scotty.
After minutes of CPR, the paramedics finally arrived, removing Scotty and the rest of the team from the room.
Scotty was sitting on a couch in the basement crying his heart when Lilly came out on a stretcher.
Scotty ran over to the stretcher and saw Lilly’s chest rising.
He breathed a sigh of relief.
He followed the paramedics out onto the streets, making sure she was still okay.
After the paramedics drove away with her, Scotty got into his car, rushing to the hospital, wanting to be there when she awoke.
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When Scotty arrived at the hospital he went to the front desk.
“I’m, here for Lilly Rush; she was bought in a few minutes ago.” He shrieked.
“What are your relations to her?” the woman asked nastily.
“I’m her fiancé.” He whispered, wanting to see her as soon as possible and not wanting to have to deal with any complications.
“Room 124, level 2.” The woman said.
Scotty didn’t have time to say thank you. He ran to find the stairs; he rushed up them, and went in search of her room.
He finally found her room, pushing the door open.
He saw her, lying there with tubes all around and connected to her. The first thing he thought of was the shot.
A doctor came in behind him.
“You’re not supposed to be in here.” The doctor complained.
“Sorry, I just wanted to make sure she was okay.”
“Well she is, so you can go.” The doctor grumbled.
Scotty turned around and left the room. He sat down on a seat facing her door.
He sat there for what felt like hours.
The doctor came out, shooting daggers at Scotty.
“Don’t go in there.” He voiced.
As the doctor turned the corner, Scotty noticed the team coming towards him.
“Is she okay?” Stillman asked.
“She’s fine.” Scotty whispered.
The team sat down around Scotty.
“Can we go in?” Will asked.
“No.”
“Apparently you told them you were her fiancé.” Stillman muttered.
“Yeah, I did.”
They sat there quiet for a while longer until a nurse stood before them.
“Are you all here to see Miss Rush?” she asked.
“Yes.” The entire team said at once.
“Well I think it would be best if you go in one at a time. I just need to check her and make sure she is stabilized.”
The nurse entered the room and not even a minute later she emerged.
“She is awake so I’ll leave you to it.” She whispered.
Scotty got up, knowing that he should be the one to see her first.
He opened the door and saw her. She looked so fragile.
Lilly was extremely pale and her eyes were bloodshot.
Scotty walked over to the side of the bed and pulled a seat over. He sat down next to her taking a hold of her hand.
She looked him in the eyes.
“Lil.” He whispered. “I’m so, so sorry. I never meant to hurt you, Frankie kissed me, I didn’t kiss her. Elena was not my girlfriend; it was all a sham to win you back. I’m didn’t mean to hurt. Please forgive me.” He cried, resting his forehead against her.
Lilly reached up and held the back of his head.
He lifted his head up, then reached down and placed soft kisses down her neck.
“I’m sorry.” He mumbled over and over again.
Lilly lay there taking in his soft words of comfort, trying to concentrate on Scotty.
“Scotty.” She whispered.
“Yeah.”
“I was so scared, he spiked my drink, he took me from the bar and I woke up all alone in the room. He beat me Scotty. It hurt so much. I wanted you to come but you never did.”
Tears were pouring down her face, she was finally letting go, over the past few days she let all her emotions go.
“It’s okay now, your safe.” He whispered.
Scotty got up and lay on the bed with Lilly. He held her close; afraid she was going to slip away.
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Post by scottylillyfan on Sept 29, 2009 23:19:43 GMT -5
It´s was cute in the end |
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Sept 30, 2009 7:18:14 GMT -5
I'm glad that Lilly was found is this the end or will there be more??
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Post by lillyscotty on Sept 30, 2009 7:29:53 GMT -5
Obviously more, thats kinda a stupid question, why would I end it like that.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Sept 30, 2009 7:31:02 GMT -5
Obviously more, thats kinda a stupid question, why would I end it like that. No need to be harsh like that, it's still early morning for me... |
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Post by lillyscotty on Sept 30, 2009 7:32:50 GMT -5
Im not being harsh, im simplying telling you thats isnt a smart question.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Sept 30, 2009 7:36:54 GMT -5
Im not being harsh, im simplying telling you thats isnt a smart question. Just calm down, I just read that chapter a little too fast.. |
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Post by lillyscotty on Sept 30, 2009 7:37:41 GMT -5
Calm Down? Im perfectly fine, I dont get why you are making a big deal.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Sept 30, 2009 7:43:27 GMT -5
Calm Down? Im perfectly fine, I dont get why you are making a big deal. I'm not forget about it  |
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Post by lillyscotty on Sept 30, 2009 21:54:03 GMT -5
After a few minutes of lying together, the rest of team entered Lilly’s room.
Lilly looked up to their shocked faces.
Lilly looked terrible, like she was practically dead.
“How’re you doing?” Stillman asked.
After catching her breath Lilly replied. “A little bit queasy, but okay I guess.”
“You look like you’ve been through hell.” Kat whispered.
“I guess you could say that.” Lilly murmured.
The team all sat down, staring at Lilly.
“You want to tell us what happened?” Stillman asked.
“Not really.”
“We need to know Lil.” Will muttered.
“I know, it’s just hard.”
“Do you want me to tell them?” Scotty asked.
Lilly nodded her head yes and sunk into Scotty’s chest.
“Briefly, they spiked her drink at a bar, took her to the factory and beat her senseless.” Scotty informed them.
“What was the purpose?” Nick asked.
“Who knows, but they are still out there, we need to find them.” Scotty mumbled.
Everything started to go quiet. Everyone was thinking about Lilly, worried if she would get through this or break down.
“Boss.” Lilly whispered. “I need time off.”
“No problem, how long?”
“1 week.” She whispered.
“I’ll give you two, and Scotty can have two as well.” He mumbled.
“Why?” Scotty asked.
“Well we need someone to look after her, you’re the best choice.”
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The next day Lilly returned home with Scotty by her side.
As she walked in the door, Scotty closed the door and pushed her against it.
“Do you forgive me?” he asked.
“Not entirely.” She whispered, trying to get him to move out of her way.
“How can I make it up to you?” he asked biting at her earring.
Through her giggles Lilly replied, “Well you can stop doing that.”
He stopped and looked into her eyes. He couldn’t help but smile at the love that he saw in her eyes.
“I’m being serious, what do I do?” he asked, grabbing a hold of her hands.
“I don’t know. You could move in with me.” Lilly whispered, looking at the floor.
“What?” he asked.
“Nothing.” She mumbled pushing him forward and darting out of the room.
Scotty stood there dazed. Lilly wanted him to move in with her, to live with her. Of course he wanted to but would he make her crazy.
One thing Scotty knew was that he was not a decent person to live with.
He travelled to bedroom, seeing Lilly putting on her nightwear.
She looked so natural.
“You want me to move in wit’ you?” he asked still stunned.
“Forget it.” She mumbled.
“No, I want you to tell me why.”
“I just...look” she said moving towards him and embracing him, so she could whisper in his ear. “I don’t want to be alone. Especially at a time like this.”
‘Well I can just sleep over for a few weeks; I don’t have to move in.”
Scotty looked Lilly in the eyes.
“What’s the real reason?” he asked.
“That is my reason.” She whispered.
Scotty knew he was taking a big step with what he was about to say, but he couldn’t hold it back anymore.
“Is Lilly Rush in love with me?” he asked her.
“What? NO!” She screamed.
“Lilly Rush is in love. With her utterly romantic, handsome partner.” He teased.
“Don’t be stupid.” She mumbled.
Scotty walked over to Lilly and captured her lips in a deep kiss.
“Don’t fight it.” He mumbled between kisses.
“Well, maybe I might be. Does it matter?” she asked.
“Yes, you told me you love, which I believe, but you never told me you were in love with me.” He mumbled.
“Tell me you’re in love with me.” He whispered.
“No! Why do you care?” she asked, half mad.
“Because I’m in love wit’ you too.”
Lilly looked up, she saw the love in Scotty’s eyes. She was scared, but something about the look he was giving her was pushing all her fears away.
“Tell me.” He demanded.
After a couple of hesitations Lilly finally said it. “I’m in love with you Scotty Valens.”
Scotty lifted Lilly up and spun her around in circles. He finally bought her down to the ground and sealed her lips with a kiss.
Lilly and Scotty were both in love. They had never been in love, let alone love someone this much. It was a start to their new life. Lilly would become more open and Scotty would be there for her needs. Luke and his mob were still out there but they would be caught in the next few days. Lilly finally let go of her fears and let Scotty in. This was their first real love, and this would be there only love. They would stay together to their very last breath.
THE END!
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Post by lillyeddiescotty on Oct 1, 2009 4:45:19 GMT -5
very good ending
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Post by lillyscotty on Oct 1, 2009 6:34:38 GMT -5
Thanks lillyeddiescotty, Im glad you liked it!
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Oct 1, 2009 7:19:07 GMT -5
Very good story, I enjoyed reading it
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Post by scottylillyfan on Oct 1, 2009 7:58:09 GMT -5
I loved it so much. I love Scotty and Lilly togheter  |
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good plot btw!
