Broken-A Cold Case Fanfic

[detectiverush345]

Title: Broken

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: All hail the makers of Cold Case.

Summary: Lily gets shot while on pursuit of a killer. How does Scotty react? Told from Scotty's POV.

Chapter1

BANG!!!

The sound ripped through me like a pair of sharpened scissors. I looked to Lily to find her staring down at the large entry wound on her abdomen as crimson read blood started pooling around the hole. She looked up at me and my brown eyes locked with her seductive blue ones before her knees started to give out and she collapsed to the floor.
I ran over to her. Kneeling by her side. "Lily! Lily! Lily! Can you hear me? Lily! Lily!" I don't know why I put so much emphasize on her name. Maybe I just hoped that the sound of such an elegant word would keep her conscious for a few more brief moments. Her eyelids where threatening to close but for the moment he could see a small portion of her green pupil through a field of light brown lashes. "Lily! Can you hear me?" I screamed.

She moaned. But there was pain in her voice. I wished that I could take the pain away from her but I couldn't. I was helpless. I didn't know what to do.

PRESSURE. The word came to me an epiphany. I had to put pressure on her wound. Again, I looked down at Lily. She was so frail and looked like she was in so much pain. I pushed her bangs out of her face before I located the bullet wound and pressed down with one of my hands.

She moaned again. I was causing her more pain. I could tell by the way her lower lip was twitching. "Stay with me Lily," I coaxed. Tears sprung to my eyes and I felt like crying, but I wouldn't allow myself to. I needed to stay strong for her.

"Scotty?" she moaned. Her voice was thin and raspy and I bent down from fear that she would strain her beautiful voice.

"I'm here," I said taking her hand in my free one. "What is it Lily?"

"I'm scared," Lily whispered.

Tears threatened to fall again. "Everything will be okay Lily. Everything will be fine."

"I love you," she whispered as her eyes began to close.

"I love you too," I said as I watched her eyes close and the sound of the ambulance rip through the quiet atmosphere. I kept pressure on her wound and prayed that the paramedics weren't too late and that she still had a chance.

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I have four more chapters written and more on the way.

[TVFan]

Nice fanfic DetectiveRush345. I look forward to your future chapters.

[Tati]

I used to read your fic at fanfiction.net . I read all the chapter and I loved it! I was really sad when you seemed to have "abandoned" the fic... glad to see you'll be writing more!

[detectiverush345]

I am sorry that it took so long for me to update. I've had many obstacles to work around this past month or two and I'm just getting back to it. Anyway here's the second chapter just so that you guys know that I am serious about this fic.

Chapter 2

I watched as the paramedics lifted her body onto a stretcher and placed an oxygen mask over her nose and mouth. My heart broke as the fog of her shallow breath fogged up the flimsy plastic of the mask. Stepping back I let the paramedics do their work hoping to step in when I got the chance.

But the paramedics were swift and they loaded my blonde angel into the ambulance. I tried to climb in but riding with her had not been an option. The paramedics closed the doors and told me that they were taking her Allegheny University Hospital. I followed in one of the squad cars.

At the hospital I found Lily in a trauma room where the doctors were cutting of the gray suit that made her look so sexy. The blood covered clothes were discarded on the floor. She would never wear them again.

I turned to see Vera, Stillman, and Jefferies walked through the corridor.

“We just heard. How is she?” Vera asked.

“I don’t know,” I said. In that moment I jinxed it. I turned back around to see that the doctors had pulled out the paddles. The sight of the doctor yelling ‘clear’ ripped my chest and all I could do was stand by and watch as Lily convulsed with the flow of the electric current.

One of the orderlies shook their head and the doctor ordered a higher charge and placed the paddles on her chest again. Her body convulsed again and the orderly nodded her head. The monitor above her bed began to beep in slow rhythmic tones.

With the knowledge that she was alive I took a deep breath. A doctor headed towards the door and exited the trauma room.

“Rush?” she asked.

“Right here,” I said.

“I’m Doctor Maria Carmichael,” she introduced herself. “I was the attending physician on your friend.”

Friend. Dr. Carmichael didn’t know. Lily and I where more than friends. More than love interests. They were more than the chain of command at the Philadelphia precinct would allow them to be. She was more than I could hope for.

“How is she?” I asked.

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There's chapter two. I will continue to work on this fic Tati and I'll post on fanfiction.net too.

[TVFan]

Another great chapter DetectiveRush345! I look forward to your next one.

[Naj]

So, Lilly and Scotty are an item or Scotty is in love with Lilly but she doesn't know? Good story so far.


~Naj

[ruda]

where are nexts chapters?

I'm waiting and waiting...