Post by Falling on Dec 15, 2003 22:23:09 GMT -5
I think to make it easier to follow, I'll send the thing in in segments. Here is the first chapter. Hah, this might make it a bit suspenseful.
Frozen
A Cold Case fanfic by Falling
*November 14, 1994*
A boy dressed in black is lying on his bed, Korn’s "Helmet in the Bush" plays in the background. No other sound is present. Suddenly a confused look is on the boy’s face. He sits up and looks out his bedside window. A teenage girl appears to be struggling with 2 men. The boy hesitates for a few moments, before turning to his phone. He dials 911, the music intensifying, before a gunshot explodes, and all is silent. A close up shot of the bottom of the phone is shown, followed by the phone falling from the boy’s hand in slow motion, bungeeing down, then up in the same slowed tone.
*Present Day*
Det.Vera: So Lil, any plans for this weekend?
Lilly: Not in particular…mom’s still sick, and sis hasn’t called, the usual.
The two enter the police station.
Lt.Stillman: Rush, I got a guy for you, check your office.
Lilly: Confession, witness…?
Lt.Stillman: See for yourself…I might be careful though.
Lilly: How comforting. *smirks, walks to office.*
She opens the door, and the boy from 1994 is looking up at her from a chair, who then flashes to a young man wearing a black sweater and jeans.
Young Man: I have to…uh, my name is Alex…Alex Malvera. I have to tell you something I saw.
Lilly: Nice to meet you Alex, Lilly Rush. What do you know?
Alex: I witnessed…I saw a crime back in 1994. It sounded pretty bad.
Lilly: Sounded?
Alex: I only saw some of it. The rest I heard.
Lilly: Well what did you see?
Alex: I saw 2 guys…and a girl. They were fighting. I tried to call the police, but then I heard a shot. So I stopped…
Lilly: Why didn’t you just call back after the shock wore off?
Alex: I went to sleep…then I forgot.
Lilly: Interesting…what brings it back from the memory banks now?
Alex: Electricity…they shocked me in my hospital…then I remembered. I asked for permission to come here, and there’s some guards outside. They’ll bring me to the hospital when I’m done.
Lilly: Obviously. Thank you for the help, Alex. Would you mind telling me where this happened?
Alex: Uh…my old apartment…67…Rickman Avenue. The alley. My bedroom window was facing it.
Lilly: We’ll check it out.
Frozen
A Cold Case fanfic by Falling
*November 14, 1994*
A boy dressed in black is lying on his bed, Korn’s "Helmet in the Bush" plays in the background. No other sound is present. Suddenly a confused look is on the boy’s face. He sits up and looks out his bedside window. A teenage girl appears to be struggling with 2 men. The boy hesitates for a few moments, before turning to his phone. He dials 911, the music intensifying, before a gunshot explodes, and all is silent. A close up shot of the bottom of the phone is shown, followed by the phone falling from the boy’s hand in slow motion, bungeeing down, then up in the same slowed tone.
*Present Day*
Det.Vera: So Lil, any plans for this weekend?
Lilly: Not in particular…mom’s still sick, and sis hasn’t called, the usual.
The two enter the police station.
Lt.Stillman: Rush, I got a guy for you, check your office.
Lilly: Confession, witness…?
Lt.Stillman: See for yourself…I might be careful though.
Lilly: How comforting. *smirks, walks to office.*
She opens the door, and the boy from 1994 is looking up at her from a chair, who then flashes to a young man wearing a black sweater and jeans.
Young Man: I have to…uh, my name is Alex…Alex Malvera. I have to tell you something I saw.
Lilly: Nice to meet you Alex, Lilly Rush. What do you know?
Alex: I witnessed…I saw a crime back in 1994. It sounded pretty bad.
Lilly: Sounded?
Alex: I only saw some of it. The rest I heard.
Lilly: Well what did you see?
Alex: I saw 2 guys…and a girl. They were fighting. I tried to call the police, but then I heard a shot. So I stopped…
Lilly: Why didn’t you just call back after the shock wore off?
Alex: I went to sleep…then I forgot.
Lilly: Interesting…what brings it back from the memory banks now?
Alex: Electricity…they shocked me in my hospital…then I remembered. I asked for permission to come here, and there’s some guards outside. They’ll bring me to the hospital when I’m done.
Lilly: Obviously. Thank you for the help, Alex. Would you mind telling me where this happened?
Alex: Uh…my old apartment…67…Rickman Avenue. The alley. My bedroom window was facing it.
Lilly: We’ll check it out.
