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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 18, 2008 14:48:34 GMT -5
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cellogal
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Post by cellogal on Apr 18, 2008 17:07:52 GMT -5
You made Scotty bald!! I'm having trouble picturing that. I'm sure he'd still be hot.
I really think something like this is going to have to happen on the show to make Lil realize how much Scotty means to her. You did an awesome job describing her feelings, and I loved the Miami Beach flashback.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 18, 2008 22:32:25 GMT -5
Lilly remembered walking back into headquarters after recovering from her gunshot. She wanted so much to hold onto Scotty for a moment longer feeling so protected and safe with him. With her coworkers standing there that couldn’t happen so instead Lilly made it out to be just a friendship type one, but felt Scotty gently squeezing her arm.
Just to go into his arms would be nice needing his comfort right now. Then the nightmares started as she felt her heart beating to an extreme wanting to call him but couldn’t without feeling weak and needy. Even when Scotty asked if she was having trouble sleep, Lilly wanted to tell him badly needing his comfort.
After finding Brenda and putting away John Smith she lay hearing how soothing Scotty’s heartbeat had sounded. Right night she wanted to hear it but more importantly consider that it was fate that brought them together mixed with love. Lilly loved him a lot which was more than the other bozos she had previously dated her heart held a special place for Scotty.
Now running through the park she remembered how he’d go with her. One time the two raced until he pretended to fall taking her down with him. Like two teenagers in love the two kissed before getting up as they continued to run. Lilly loved just spending time with him like this; Scotty was the type of guy who had a great fun side which she enjoyed a lot.
Still she was trying to find a specific reason why Scotty meant so much to her. Maybe that answer would be found later in time. Lilly knew right now she had to take care of him, knowing he could recover from this alone. Now sitting in his room she decided to give him a shave.
Lathering him up Lilly did the best she could with all the tubes. He never looked right with stubble or a beard. Scotty was just plain sexy without any hair on his face knowing that his best feature was his eyes besides his hot body. Now wiping off the remains she noticed that Scotty’s eyes were staring straight ahead.
“Hey you hear me” Lilly said” I’m alive you saved my life” assuring him that she was still in his life before she began to cry. It hurt to see the man she loved in this state wanting to be romanced by him, remembering that one night they were on a boat in Miami.
The stars and moon shone brightly from up above while Lilly looked up at them. She exhaled a breath with hearing the seagulls crying out in the distance, before feeling a pair of arms around his waist. Scotty’s lips then kissed her neck as she spoke” Used to look out my window just watching the stars but all I could hear was the loud drunks on the street”.
Lilly then turned around as he held her close speaking softly in Spanish to her. Somehow she knew it loved words judging by the tone in his voice. Then hitting the play button on the CD player the two slowly danced together underneath the moonlight as a particular song called” You and Me By Life house”. Looking over at Scotty he started singing softly into her blue eyes” I can’t take my eyes off of you” as Lilly laughed” Trying to win American Idol or something”?
“Yeah I am” he jokes before she kissed him” Got a Ninety one thirty six “which was his badge number. Scotty deepened their kiss” But you Lil get a Ninety one twenty three and this” dipping her as his lips pressed against hers. As the CD now played “Open Arms” By Journey the two danced while the stars lit up in the sky. All Lilly could think have been just enjoying this moment together as a couple.
Now Scotty was lying there after being shot” Come back to me, I need you” Lilly said” Remember how you dragged me into that club which was well worth it. We must have danced the whole night even Vera looked at us like we were crazy”.
Feeling another tear dropped she sniffled it back” You protected me Scotty I wasn’t hurt this time” that wasn’t enough to make him feel convinced. In his mind he could hear her voice but was trapped trying to get back to his girl. Scotty knows Lilly needed him but his mind was so dark it was hard for him to remember anything.
Though his eyes were open he could see a single tear spilling out of a sea of blue. As its tiny liquid form trailed down past her freckles near the lips that he wanted to reach out and touch. Then it dropped falling onto his face. The warmness of it seeping into his skin signaling she was in need of his comfort. Scotty could hear her crying but tried to move but couldn’t he was too weak.
All he was able to do was squeeze Lilly’s hand while his mind screamed out” HEY” over and over again. Now as she got up Scotty wanted her as he felt her kissing him” Lil stay please I need you, don’t leave me” but knew she couldn’t read his mind.
Now as Lilly walked home in the rain wanting Scotty to hold her hand. She felt alone facing the world without him at her side before closing her eyes while looking up. Cool rain drops fell upon her face telling her senses that she was alive. Then opening them up a couple in loves laughed as they kissed. Lilly stood there missing the man who had always brought her comfort and love.
Now at home Lilly stood there drinking her hot tea while listening the song” Angel by the one who's name we shall not say McLachlan feeling like she was in a scene from that movie” City of Angels” but it was the lyric that made her think of Scotty.
“In the arms of the angel far away from here” knowing his comfort was always there but Lilly always had pushed it away. Now her love was in the hospital far from where she was a man that always made her laugh and understood her. All alone now Lilly felt lonely without him but knew she was only alive because of him.
Ed fell to the ground as Scotty raced in before hearing her sigh” He got me”. Many emotions raced through his body before he held Lilly close while applying pressure. He didn’t want the woman he adored day in and day out to die. The scene the flashed to him pacing outside while she was inside, Scotty’s heart was breaking feeling like the rope was being severed from Lilly forever.
Lilly now felt her heart thumping underneath the palm of her hand. She was alive even during the worst of her depression knowing that comfort could always be found with him. Back in the hospital Scotty lay there in the darkness aching to hear her voice; he didn’t want to be alone. All he could see is that beautiful smile of the woman who had stolen his heart.
“Lil I need you” his inner voice said” Please come to me I’m scared” hoping she would receive this message. Then across the city Lilly lay in her bed wearing Scotty’s black t-shirt for some random reason. Remembering how on some nights the two would talk all night how she confided into him about her nightmares.
Now with that gone Lilly looked over wanting to look into his eyes again” I love you” she thought before turning on the game. Though she loved baseball it wasn’t the same without Scotty being there, but kept score.
A week later his hand moved wanting to write something done. Placing a pen and paper down in from of him, he then began to write: Love you Lil all my heart.
“Love you too Scotty”
As the pen dropped she saw the words” Hey” before the doctors removed the ventilator. Now drawing in a deep breath Scotty coughed” Lil’ he managed to say as a nurse placed an oxygen mask over his face.
“His vitals are steady; he’s making a good recovery “The doctors stated as Lilly smiled as the sunshine peeked in through the blinds.
“Proud of you” she said before kissing him.
tbc..
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Post by lsr on Apr 19, 2008 10:37:54 GMT -5
LII2- Wow I just read about 4 chapters and still have 4 more to go! I still don't know how you manage to churn out these awesome stories so quickly! I really like this. It's sweet to see them acting so comfortable with each other. Good job of bringing up the things from their past that have stayed with them. (ie Elisa's death etc) I was proud of Lilly that she was able to finally tell Scotty and I like the way you describe Scotty wanting so much to have been there for her. Nice touch! Hopefully sometime later tonight I'll be able to get to the next installments! I look forward to it! Great story, LII2!
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Post by cellogal on Apr 19, 2008 10:54:40 GMT -5
Another lovely update; I love your journey through Lilly's head. Flashback was a nice touch; such a sweet scene for the two of them.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 19, 2008 19:56:46 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 20, 2008 20:03:35 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 20, 2008 20:42:09 GMT -5
The next chapter will deal with their minds and how they feel about themselves and each other.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 20, 2008 22:41:28 GMT -5
When Lilly was able to wheel Scotty down the hallway, he felt like an invalid not being capable of doing anything anymore. One thing he didn’t want was to ruin her life knowing she had a chance of becoming both a wife and a mother. Now with a million thoughts rushing through his head Scotty was now left to figure out who he really was inside. While his heart loved Lilly he still didn’t know where his own happiness was.
Sure that vacation to Miami Beach gave him a chance to see Lilly happy and carefree. It hurt that he couldn’t fully enjoy it still worrying about her. Scotty needed to realize that she was now way past the zombie mode that Lilly had been in since the shooting. He could see her many accomplishments knowing it was hard to move on from being so alone and sad. Where did this leave him was it possible that was so confused about everything including love and just brought Lilly along for the ride?
Now as she helped him back onto the bed Scotty took a long glance into her eyes. He could see how much love was clearly evident but also how beautifully blue the color was. Lilly had stolen his heart from day one but why did he had to screw up by doing her sister? Sure he proved to her how to be a good friend and also save her life, but why did Scotty feel so guilty about everything?
Part of his guilt stemmed from day before the shooting. Why didn’t he tell Lilly simply to stay home and not got in, every after she wanted to be alone? There was no reason for a woman so beautiful and smart to be shot and almost die on the table. Lilly did it to protect her coworkers but it was like a suicide attempt after knowing that she had no family left.
Even while the nightmares robbed her from must needed sleep, Scotty didn’t try and help her. He could see the suffering and sadness in Lilly’s eyes but instead made another mistake and slept with that stupid redheaded woman who meant nothing to him or his heart. There weren’t many women who did make him feel that way he felt with Lilly.
Elisa was his childhood love but he had to move on knowing her illness was growing worse. When she died he wouldn’t even let a certain blonde he adored to comfort him. They both were alike in how they both dealt with their own emotional problems, bottling it all up inside not telling a single soul about. In Lilly’s own mind she too thought the same thing knew they both couldn’t tell each other the secrets inside of their hearts.
Hers was so badly broken that a heartache would shatter that beating muscles into tiny little pieces. Lilly feared that most often but knew she wanted to be with Scotty. It felt so right being with him knowing the comfort was always there but faced more communication problems. She wanted so much to tell him all the painful memories that needed to be escaped. Lilly had to close the book on her childhood knowing she would be a happier person.
Every day she awoke not thinking one bit about the shooting. Now her mind was free and clear from all of that, but tried to live each day by the moment. Yoga and running helped keep the past from creeping up but got Lilly to learn how to relax knowing she was alive and not dead. Most importantly she smiled and laughed which Scotty once told her it reminded her of when they had first met.
tbc..
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 21, 2008 9:58:17 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 22, 2008 10:23:24 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 22, 2008 20:17:20 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 23, 2008 21:35:22 GMT -5
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cellogal
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Post by cellogal on Apr 23, 2008 21:56:07 GMT -5
Yay!! Dealing with the Christina issue! I'm glad Scotty's seeing a counselor; I think it's making a big difference.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 24, 2008 11:23:43 GMT -5
Thanks the next chapter will be up soon , I want Scotty to deal with more issues but a wedding soon
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 24, 2008 13:39:29 GMT -5
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Post by lsr on Apr 24, 2008 14:03:29 GMT -5
Oh this is such a great story, LII2! I printed off every chapter last night and read it through today. I am just loving how you’re incorporating a lot of the issues that lie between L&S right now. It makes it so much more true to the characters and I really like the idea that they are dealing with them instead of just being together blindly. The hospital scenes were so full of angsty goodness. It’s so sweet to see her realizing how much he means to her. You had me worried that Scotty wasn’t going to make it for a minute but everything was better by the next chapter. Phew. And awww.. they are setting the date! She's even trying on wedding gowns. Is everything going to go smoothly here??? Anyway, I just finished the last chapter and now I want to read more so I’m going to keep an eye on this thread for updates!
Good job LII2!!
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 24, 2008 20:38:35 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 25, 2008 13:18:18 GMT -5
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 25, 2008 21:29:12 GMT -5
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