ruda
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Post by ruda on Jul 4, 2005 23:51:35 GMT -5
SHORTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANT KNOW WHAT BE HAPPEND IN NEXT CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....
;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Shorty on Jul 5, 2005 1:28:28 GMT -5
ok, i finally got around to posting this on fanfiction ;D
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Post by TVFan on Jul 5, 2005 10:12:25 GMT -5
Great chapters Shorty! I love how you go into the heads of the characters. It's very well done, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Post by Tati on Jul 8, 2005 14:50:21 GMT -5
Nice fic, Shorty. :smile39: I left you a review on ff.net.
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Post by Shorty on Jul 8, 2005 16:49:52 GMT -5
im glad you like it Tv fan ;D!! thanks Tati!!!!!! ;D, hmm, ill try imrove my punctuation, i think my english teacher would agree with you if she BOTHERED to read our homework assignments, my dad would definately agree ;D- i typed up 3 pages of a story for him once, he gave me one page of spelling and grammer that could be improved  ;D |
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Post by ruda on Jul 9, 2005 1:07:28 GMT -5
Shorty....... go! go! go!
write! write! write!
please.... I want know what be happend here!
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Post by Shorty on Jul 9, 2005 19:08:10 GMT -5
i did say id continue it now if i could just stop singing.....
I love you, always forever
Near and far, closer together
Everywhere, I will be with you
Everything, I will do for you
I love you, always forever
Near and far, closer together
Everywhere, I will be with you
Everything, I will do for you ...
Say you'll love, love me forever
Never stop, not for whatever
Near and far and always and
everywhere and everything
Say you'll love, love me forever
Never stop, not for whatever
Near and far and always and
everywhere and everything
Say you'll love, love me forever
Never stop, not for whatever
Near and far and always and
everywhere and everything
its stuck in my my head :smile10:
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Post by Shorty on Jul 9, 2005 19:14:19 GMT -5
:smile77: OK ill attempt it :smile50:
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Lilly stared blindly at the note for several minutes before Scotty broke her trance with
"so are you going to tell me what it says or what?"
she looked at him with uncomprehending eyes before giving herself a shake and handing him the note.
While he read it, she got her keys and unlocked her car door.
She was about to get in when Scotty caught her elbow, annoyed she looked up at him
"what?"
she snapped
"you cant stay home on your own!"
Lilly felt exasperated, the last thing she needed was an over-protective Scotty on her case
"and why do you think that?"
she asked, putting as much menace as passable into those 6 words, hoping to deter him.
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normally Scotty would have left well enough alone but Lilly was in danger and he felt the overwhelming desire to protect her from the danger she was in, the danger she was refusing to acknowledge
"because you've just received a letter from a known murderer, threatening to kidnap you"
"not for another week!"
she snapped, pointing at the letter
"oh so you think that he'll keep his word and wait a week, for heavens sake Lil! the mans a murderer!"
"we don't even know for sure it IS from this guy"
Scotty stared at her in exasperation, she stared back, fiery determination and anger sparking behind her eyes
"and i mean, come on, i doubt he'll make good one his threat"
He knew she didnt believe that and so didnt bother with an answer
"ill see you tomorrow Scotty"
she snatched the note out of his hands, wrenched her elbow out of his grasp and slammed the door in his face
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ruda
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Post by ruda on Jul 10, 2005 11:34:20 GMT -5
very very very good!!!
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Post by TVFan on Jul 11, 2005 11:07:05 GMT -5
You really captured Lilly's stubborness and toughness in this chapter Shorty! Great job! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Post by ruda on Oct 22, 2005 15:26:39 GMT -5
ok... we want more  please Shorty, can you write next chapters? PLEASE!!!!!! |
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Post by ruda on Jan 14, 2006 17:40:03 GMT -5
Shortyyyyyyy.... where are you? ;D add more, please!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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Post by schafferius on Feb 10, 2006 5:15:06 GMT -5
Hi guys, I am new to this forum. However I have some experience in writing. I would love to continue this story, but just dont want to tread on anyone's toes. The story, of course, is Shorty's. However, I have noticed that he has not posted a new chapter in a while. Wouldnt mind continuing it, so if people (including Shorty) could let me know how they feel about it, that would be great. Cheers =)
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Post by tapageur on Feb 10, 2006 9:29:09 GMT -5
hi shafferius, welcome! personnaly I'd love it if you continue with that great story, but I guess the definite answer lies in shorty's ahnds wherever he/she has disappeared!!! :smile70:
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