Post by r2k on Jan 17, 2005 0:29:55 GMT -5
Here is the latest. For a more recent case, it turned out pretty good. I promise a good twist at the end. Forgive me if the Arab family names are a little off. I did a tiny bit of research but kind of slopped it together. And some characters in this episode a little bigoted.
The Cell
September 10, 2001
“Stuck in America” by Sugar Cult plays in the background.
In the suburbs, a black truck drives down the street. A young man and girl are in it.
Robert: Where we eatin’?
Wendy: Not sure. I was kind of in the mood for tacos tonight. How ‘bout Taco Bell.
Robert: Okay, Taco Bell it is.
Wendy: I’ll let the others know.
Robert: I’ve got to get home a little early. Before nine.
Wendy: Mom been on your case lately.
Robert: Yeah. She thinks my grades are gonna slip again.
Wendy: That’s not going to happen. You’re gonna do great this year. Your SATs were spectacular.
Robert: Couldn’t have done it with you.
Wendy: Leave some credit for your grandmother. She helped out too.
(The truck arrives at Robert’s grandmother’s house.)
Annie: Robert, you made it. I need a small favor. I have a light bulb that’s out and I don’t want to try to climb up on the step stool. My knee’s not doing so good.
Robert: Sure. Where is it?
Annie: It’s in the hallway by my bedroom.
(Annie looks at Wendy and begins to talk to her.)
Annie: I just can’t do that anymore. I don’t want to take any chances. How have you been, Wendy?
Wendy: Just great. You heard about Robert’s SATs.
Annie: I’m so proud. He worked so hard. I always knew he could do it. His grandfather did too.
(Robert is replacing the light bulb while they are talking.)
Annie: Have you two eaten?
Robert: We were going to Taco Bell.
Annie: I still have some stuffed cabbage in the fridge. I could warm it up for you.
Robert: Well, we’re meeting some friends. They’re expecting us.
Annie: Well, you two must come over this upcoming weekend. I’m making that spaghetti sauce you like so much.
Robert: Ooooh. Wendy, you have to try this sauce. She makes it from scratch. Even puts wine in it. Tastes like a restaurant.
Wendy: We don’t have anything planned. Sounds delicious.
Annie: Great. I’ll pick some things up on Friday. How about you arrive at 4:30 and we’ll eat at five. You don’t have to stay too long. I know you kids want to go out.
(Robert finishes and comes down the stepping stool.)
Robert: All done, grandma.
Annie: Thank you. I really appreciate this, Robert.
Robert: That’s why I’m here.
Annie: Wait a minute.
(She goes into her bedroom and gets some money.)
Annie: Dinner’s on me. Take it.
Robert: Thank you grandma.
(Robert hugs her.)
Annie: Now, go on. Mom said she wanted you back by nine. It’s 7:30 now. Have a good time.
Robert: Thanks. I’ll call you before Saturday.
(Robert and Wendy walk to the truck.)
Wendy: Your grandmother is so sweet. And you are so sweet to her. I like that in a guy.
Robert: She’s great. But she hates the truck.
Wendy: We better hurry. Everyone should be there by now.
(Robert looks over to the house to the left.)
Robert: The Abdullah’s must not be home. They haven’t been around lately.
(Annie looks to her left at the house with a worried look on her face as she goes back in.)
Later. Annie is in her basement. Her throat has been slit. There are signs of a struggle. The side door is open on the inside. The screen door is closed.)
In the Cold Case box room, Annie’s box is being stored
A Kelpser September 2001
Meanwhile in the present
(Lily’s desk. Robert is sitting there. Scotty is with them.)
Robert: This is her. (He hands a picture of Annie to Lily)
Lily: She looks nice. I’m sure she must have been a super grandmother.
Robert: She was. A bit needy at times. I didn’t mind. She fed me so much and gave me money. I always knew she loved me. She loved us all which is why she deserved better.
Lily: Why are you having second thoughts about her death now?
Robert: Well, there’s something I haven’t mentioned to you yet.
Scotty: And what is that?
Robert: She was found dead pretty early. My mom always called her in the morning. You know, to see if she was still alive. Grandmother was 76. Mom was just being careful. She never answered. Mom asked me to stop by on the way to school. I found her dead. That was about 7:20. I figured I’d leave at 7:15, find her okay and be at school before 7:45. Police arrived about 8:00. Investigation was going just fine until a little after 9:00.
Scotty: What happened then?
Robert: Two planes crashed into the World Trade Center buildings. One in the Pentagon, and another outside Pittsburg. You know the rest.
Lily: 9/11.
Robert: Immediately, police lost interest. Mom was devastated. Then, hours later, the FBI arrived and broke into the house next door. (Starts crying.) My mom and I are crying because my grandmother and her mother was found with her throat slit and FBI are taking the house next door. The neighbors had already learned what happened to gramdma. They told FBI what happened to her.
Scotty: Did FBI investigate?
Robert: Yes. They figured the neighbors must have killed her. Said she must have found out what was going on and they slit her throat. Seemed to be their M.O. that day. Her house had been robbed. Some valuables were taken.
Lily: What do you think happened?
Robert: I would never dare tell this to anyone in my family. It wasn’t that Arab family next door. They weren’t there that night. In fact, they weren’t the last few nights. I had been over there a few days. The lights in the Abdullah’s house were never on.
Lily: Maybe they were out when you were there.
Robert: No, impossible.
Scotty: Those situations happen.
Robert: I’m telling you. The lights were never on. They had left. A few of the neighbors claimed they were there that weekend, but they don’t know what they were talking about. They just wanted to sound important. Perhaps guilty they didn’t see anything.
Lily: Was it possible the Abdullahs could have still been there.
Robert: One of the neighbors claimed the Abdullahs were making some noise Sunday. I was on the phone with my grandmother at a little after 9:00. I had noticed they weren’t around so I asked her.
Scotty: What did she say?
Robert: She said they hadn’t been home at all that evening. This neighbor said they were loud at around sunset. The sun went down over an hour before I called her. Everyone was too quick to accept the answer given to them. FBI didn’t really look into it. The police were kept out of it. In time, her death was forgotten. I’ll never forget it. Please, detective. Something was missed. The circumstances around her death made a real investigation impossible. That was a bad day for all of us. My grandmother’s murder got lost in the tragedy.
OPENING CREDITS
The Cell
September 10, 2001
“Stuck in America” by Sugar Cult plays in the background.
In the suburbs, a black truck drives down the street. A young man and girl are in it.
Robert: Where we eatin’?
Wendy: Not sure. I was kind of in the mood for tacos tonight. How ‘bout Taco Bell.
Robert: Okay, Taco Bell it is.
Wendy: I’ll let the others know.
Robert: I’ve got to get home a little early. Before nine.
Wendy: Mom been on your case lately.
Robert: Yeah. She thinks my grades are gonna slip again.
Wendy: That’s not going to happen. You’re gonna do great this year. Your SATs were spectacular.
Robert: Couldn’t have done it with you.
Wendy: Leave some credit for your grandmother. She helped out too.
(The truck arrives at Robert’s grandmother’s house.)
Annie: Robert, you made it. I need a small favor. I have a light bulb that’s out and I don’t want to try to climb up on the step stool. My knee’s not doing so good.
Robert: Sure. Where is it?
Annie: It’s in the hallway by my bedroom.
(Annie looks at Wendy and begins to talk to her.)
Annie: I just can’t do that anymore. I don’t want to take any chances. How have you been, Wendy?
Wendy: Just great. You heard about Robert’s SATs.
Annie: I’m so proud. He worked so hard. I always knew he could do it. His grandfather did too.
(Robert is replacing the light bulb while they are talking.)
Annie: Have you two eaten?
Robert: We were going to Taco Bell.
Annie: I still have some stuffed cabbage in the fridge. I could warm it up for you.
Robert: Well, we’re meeting some friends. They’re expecting us.
Annie: Well, you two must come over this upcoming weekend. I’m making that spaghetti sauce you like so much.
Robert: Ooooh. Wendy, you have to try this sauce. She makes it from scratch. Even puts wine in it. Tastes like a restaurant.
Wendy: We don’t have anything planned. Sounds delicious.
Annie: Great. I’ll pick some things up on Friday. How about you arrive at 4:30 and we’ll eat at five. You don’t have to stay too long. I know you kids want to go out.
(Robert finishes and comes down the stepping stool.)
Robert: All done, grandma.
Annie: Thank you. I really appreciate this, Robert.
Robert: That’s why I’m here.
Annie: Wait a minute.
(She goes into her bedroom and gets some money.)
Annie: Dinner’s on me. Take it.
Robert: Thank you grandma.
(Robert hugs her.)
Annie: Now, go on. Mom said she wanted you back by nine. It’s 7:30 now. Have a good time.
Robert: Thanks. I’ll call you before Saturday.
(Robert and Wendy walk to the truck.)
Wendy: Your grandmother is so sweet. And you are so sweet to her. I like that in a guy.
Robert: She’s great. But she hates the truck.
Wendy: We better hurry. Everyone should be there by now.
(Robert looks over to the house to the left.)
Robert: The Abdullah’s must not be home. They haven’t been around lately.
(Annie looks to her left at the house with a worried look on her face as she goes back in.)
Later. Annie is in her basement. Her throat has been slit. There are signs of a struggle. The side door is open on the inside. The screen door is closed.)
In the Cold Case box room, Annie’s box is being stored
A Kelpser September 2001
Meanwhile in the present
(Lily’s desk. Robert is sitting there. Scotty is with them.)
Robert: This is her. (He hands a picture of Annie to Lily)
Lily: She looks nice. I’m sure she must have been a super grandmother.
Robert: She was. A bit needy at times. I didn’t mind. She fed me so much and gave me money. I always knew she loved me. She loved us all which is why she deserved better.
Lily: Why are you having second thoughts about her death now?
Robert: Well, there’s something I haven’t mentioned to you yet.
Scotty: And what is that?
Robert: She was found dead pretty early. My mom always called her in the morning. You know, to see if she was still alive. Grandmother was 76. Mom was just being careful. She never answered. Mom asked me to stop by on the way to school. I found her dead. That was about 7:20. I figured I’d leave at 7:15, find her okay and be at school before 7:45. Police arrived about 8:00. Investigation was going just fine until a little after 9:00.
Scotty: What happened then?
Robert: Two planes crashed into the World Trade Center buildings. One in the Pentagon, and another outside Pittsburg. You know the rest.
Lily: 9/11.
Robert: Immediately, police lost interest. Mom was devastated. Then, hours later, the FBI arrived and broke into the house next door. (Starts crying.) My mom and I are crying because my grandmother and her mother was found with her throat slit and FBI are taking the house next door. The neighbors had already learned what happened to gramdma. They told FBI what happened to her.
Scotty: Did FBI investigate?
Robert: Yes. They figured the neighbors must have killed her. Said she must have found out what was going on and they slit her throat. Seemed to be their M.O. that day. Her house had been robbed. Some valuables were taken.
Lily: What do you think happened?
Robert: I would never dare tell this to anyone in my family. It wasn’t that Arab family next door. They weren’t there that night. In fact, they weren’t the last few nights. I had been over there a few days. The lights in the Abdullah’s house were never on.
Lily: Maybe they were out when you were there.
Robert: No, impossible.
Scotty: Those situations happen.
Robert: I’m telling you. The lights were never on. They had left. A few of the neighbors claimed they were there that weekend, but they don’t know what they were talking about. They just wanted to sound important. Perhaps guilty they didn’t see anything.
Lily: Was it possible the Abdullahs could have still been there.
Robert: One of the neighbors claimed the Abdullahs were making some noise Sunday. I was on the phone with my grandmother at a little after 9:00. I had noticed they weren’t around so I asked her.
Scotty: What did she say?
Robert: She said they hadn’t been home at all that evening. This neighbor said they were loud at around sunset. The sun went down over an hour before I called her. Everyone was too quick to accept the answer given to them. FBI didn’t really look into it. The police were kept out of it. In time, her death was forgotten. I’ll never forget it. Please, detective. Something was missed. The circumstances around her death made a real investigation impossible. That was a bad day for all of us. My grandmother’s murder got lost in the tragedy.
OPENING CREDITS