samanda
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Post by samanda on Dec 28, 2004 17:38:23 GMT -5
I was thinking of doing a cont. fan fic. Only thing is that I'm not good with music, dialogue, transitions, or basically anything but the idea. I'll just post a few scenes or something and if anyone wants to take it and add to it when i post it should feel free to do so.
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samanda
Lilly Rush
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Post by samanda on Dec 28, 2004 19:48:57 GMT -5
Here goes. It's just a few scenes.
DISCLAIMER: None of the characters belong to me.
SPOILERS: Mindhunters
[Report Control Unit]
Everyone is there but Lilly discussing a new case. Camera turns and we see Lilly, alone in a partitioned file room, leaning and looking at reports. Suddenly she jolts straight up and runs out the door. The group looks up as they hear the door slam and Lilly is gone.
[Bar/ Kitchen]
Lilly runs into the bar. There’s a man standing behind the counter. Her sister is nowhere in sight.
Lilly: Is Chris here?
Man: Chris…?
Lilly: Christina. Christina Rush.
Man: No. She left a while ago. Some cop came and asked for her.
Lilly runs out of the bar, gets in her car, and speeds away.
[Stillman’s office]
Stillman: How long ago did Lil leave?
Scotty: About half an hour ago.
Stillman: Left no notes?
Vera: None. Checked her desk, the file room, even the cold case box room.
Jeffries: It’s only been half an hour.
Stillman: We all know Lil would never be gone from work this long during the day. I guess she could be out with interviews.
Scotty: Nah. She would’ve told us or dragged one of us along.
[The woods]
Lilly is running, gun in her hand. She’s screaming, “Chris!” over and over again.
We get a flash of Chris. She’s running too, followed by someone.
We hear a scream as the screen fades to black, “To Be Continued…” flashing up on the screen.
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Post by detectiverush345 on Feb 22, 2005 14:37:10 GMT -5
I like this. I'm not sure how I would continue it if I tried but it seems like a good fic. Maybe I'll take a shot when I finish my fic BROKEN. Anyway, nice job generating the idea.
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ruda
Lilly Rush
The Lilly and Ray Official Member
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Post by ruda on Oct 22, 2005 15:57:35 GMT -5
ok... I want more. realy... can you write more?
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Post by sukkerspinn on Oct 29, 2005 18:16:30 GMT -5
Wow, this could be quite interesting! Anyone gonna continue it?
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ruda
Lilly Rush
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Post by ruda on Oct 30, 2005 3:42:21 GMT -5
a2z
please... write more!!! please... continue this ff!!!
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