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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 10, 2008 12:51:56 GMT -5
Guys, this chapter was just a dream. The next and final one is the real ending. This story has a lots of twists and turns
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Post by lsr on Apr 10, 2008 18:13:18 GMT -5
Guys, this chapter was just a dream. The next and final one is the real ending. This story has a lots of twists and turns Oh, phew! Way to give a girl a heart attack. lol. Can't wait for the continuation.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 10, 2008 20:25:45 GMT -5
Final Chapter
As the light flashed back and forth, Lilly saw her whole world spinning. Then a gunshot was heard sending her back straight up now seeing that this was all just a very bad dream. Her breathing was heavy before seeing that her one true love was still alive. Scotty eye’s looked warm and caring before pulling her into embrace.
Lilly cried softly knowing the safety and protect was in fact still there. Her head nestled against his chest hearing a certain heartbeat that had always brought comfort. Each beat was soft as she counted to listen knowing it wasn’t going to stop any time sooner. Lilly then felt her baby moving knowing now what she was going to have.
Call it intuition but she knew by the dream it had to be a girl, then the realization of the dream set in. What if this was foreshadowing something that would happen in the future, could the two find a way to prevent it? Then worry set in about her unborn child’s heart as tear streamed down her face.
“You were gasping hard “Scotty said” What happened”? She knew he was the only person on the planet who could really understand her. Taking in deep breath her words began to leave her mouth.
“We were after this killer torn our family apart. Then I was there watching you dying from a head wound” as Scotty held her” I’m here Lil always will be” He then kept a hand there feeling their baby kicking” He’s out there Scotty we need to find him”. “Find who Lil” a question that Lilly now felt stupid for asking. There was no case like this but now all the two looked forward to be the birth of their baby. Closing her eyes she lay back down letting Scotty’s heartbeat lulled her back to sleep.
Then two hours later the phone rang” Hello Lillian” sending chills throughout her entire body. As she opened her eyes breathing very heavily; as Lilly found herself in a hospital bed. Scotty was next to her before the two kissed.
“You died” she said gasping. His smile warmed” No I’m here, worried about you and the baby”. Her hand rested on her stomach feeling the little life inside of her moving. Now softly stroking it Lilly grew confused about everything” When was I admitted”? “Yesterday when you stopped breathing during the night” Scotty replied” Thought we were going to lose the baby as well, but it’s okay” motioning to the fetal heart monitor. She looked at it before memories from the dream appeared” Your dead Scotty, I watched you die”.
Now getting onto the bed, Lilly rested her head down on his chest. She could hear his heart thumping softly bringing back that comfort and safety. Just feeling Scotty’s arms holding her Lilly closed her eyes knowing the one person in the world was still by her side. Even after she had been released everything in the dream had symbolized her fears in every way.
The heartbeat represented love and comfort, which Lilly had searched for a long time. Just being with Scotty gave her everything she practically yearned for even feeling that protection that only he could bring. This love was different especially how much he goes to make sure nothing would ever happen to her.
Lilly was the only reason for Scotty to get out of bed each and every morning. He felt that need that urge to protect and love her; but was able now to express his feelings that had been bottled up. What made it even better was the fact they both were about to become parents. Their baby now lying in its warm environment too was comforted by the sound of her heartbeat.
“I love you always” Scotty whispered” Nothing could ever change that”. This dream not only was hers but his as well. Call it crazy but maybe it represented their worst fears, their Darkened Seas. In his dream the killer represented a combination of both George and Ed the two men who had tortured Lilly once. It was not only them but her past as well, especially the man who had attacked and broke her jaw at the age of ten. Her fear of not wanting to let someone in stemmed from that incident but many others as well. Even during her worst days Scotty wouldn’t give up in fact he remained there out of love. For that Lilly was now engaged and pregnant.
Most of all she continued to realized how important he was to her. Without Scotty there would be safety that he always had provided. Now snuggling into his chest the two let their Darkened Seas dreams flow out of their minds.
A month later Lilly gave birth to a baby girl named Emily. Just that night they had brought her home for the first time the phone rang. Her heart raced with anxiety before hearing it was just Vera. Later on the two received another one.
“Hello Lillian” before the line went dead.
The end I really enjoyed writing this story. Feel free to leave other comments on my other fics, the more I can improve and try to make my writing better. Yes this story had a lot of turns that's the beauty I wanted to express.
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Post by cellogal on Apr 10, 2008 20:33:14 GMT -5
Glad Scotty's not really dead! Great job on the end; you're right; lots of twists and turns with this one.
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Post by longislanditalian2 on Apr 12, 2008 7:44:44 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews although I struggled to write this one.
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